Double Drabble: Nature (Uther, Merlin+Arthur)

Apr 28, 2009 18:33

Summary: Uther notices. 200 words. For phantomjam.

NatureUther comes upon them unexpectedly in an empty hallway ( Read more... )

fixed-forms, tense: present, drabbles-double, pairing:arthur/merlin, fanfic, words: 200, fanfic: merlin, merlin

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coffeejunkii April 28 2009, 23:42:48 UTC
uther would be right! i love the image of sunlight streaming over them, and of merlin willing arthur to listen with his body and his voice.

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b_hallward April 29 2009, 02:23:38 UTC
He would! And thanks. I love this particular part of their dynamic, Merlin's focus and persuasiveness, Arthur trusting and listening.

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tinx_r April 28 2009, 23:44:12 UTC
Divine. You write like an angel, my dearest.

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b_hallward April 29 2009, 02:25:05 UTC
Thank you! There is nothing so inspiring as pretty boys who stare to intently and stand too close.

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bewarethesmirk April 29 2009, 01:15:17 UTC
I love this so much. Just right.

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b_hallward April 29 2009, 02:06:41 UTC
The alternate summary for this was: Uther is perturbed when he catches Merlin and Arthur having eye-sex in public. He vows to keep an eye on this situation himself. *g*

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samescenes April 29 2009, 04:31:17 UTC
Oh. *heartclench*

Uther gives such a radically different pov on the boys relationship that what we usually think about. Love it!

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b_hallward April 30 2009, 02:44:11 UTC
That's really what caught my interest here. Merlin and Arthur aren't exactly subtle, so what would Uther see if he really stopped and looked at them.

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b_hallward April 30 2009, 02:51:36 UTC
I love that coldness in Uther, that exacting quality; and how, in part because of it, he can see a great deal of the dynamic between them, the mechanisms of how it works, but at the same time misses a lot, fails to grasp the animating principles.

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