Second Chance LJ Idol, Week 2, Topic: Irreversable

Jan 18, 2011 16:50

When an illusion breaks, the path from past to future can no longer be traversed ( Read more... )

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michikatinski January 19 2011, 03:34:49 UTC
Amazing what can come of the horrific things other people do.

This hit close to home. Thanks for writing.

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beyond_my_smile January 19 2011, 03:58:21 UTC
Good for you!

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myrna_bird January 20 2011, 18:12:01 UTC
Nice job!

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sweeny_todd January 20 2011, 22:50:47 UTC
This is a wonderful piece of writing.

But soon, I saw illusions instilled into me fall away too. An illusion of weakness, of hesitation, of being weak and disappointing. The illusion of finding it necessary to "act like a man"... all these illusions that had been put on me by someone else. These illusions which had, honestly, made up my entire childhood and bound up my personality, pinned it down and kept me from being my true self had fallen away.

this paragraph is amazing

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lawchicky January 22 2011, 02:02:07 UTC
Beautifully written, and good for you to continue moving forward.

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