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Jul 30, 2009 13:18

WIP Amnesty Festival of Fun, day three. All this one needs is an awkward conversation and some porn at the end, so it might actually really get finished. Eventually. It took me two years to write the porn at the end of that Dean/Gordon story, so. eta: The porn which was actually kickstarted/half-written by estrellada, lest we forget, and if I was a good ( Read more... )

(fic) wip amnesty festival of fun, (fic) snippet

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languisity July 31 2009, 01:10:48 UTC
I'm not sure if you're usage of the phrase "back on the meat wagon" was supposed to make me giggle, but it did. That was pretty awesome.

I really like this! So I'm going to hold out hope that it gets finished. You have this awesome way of making these things seem like they might be true, even when they're pretty out there. Plus, like, this is one of four things I've read in Andy's voice that didn't make me want to cry.

And and and. You write Patrick like he *isn't* made of rainbows and unicorns and daisies. And I feel like you never want people to forget that he's sometimes gross/an asshole/just human. Which I love. And wow, that was a bit of a tangent.

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azurejay August 1 2009, 16:27:40 UTC
Of course it was. If it seems funny, it's totally supposed to be :D

Plus, like, this is one of four things I've read in Andy's voice that didn't make me want to cry.

It's so strange that people have such a hard time writing Andy (myself included!). I don't even know why that might be.

And wow, that was a bit of a tangent.

No, no, more like my mission in bandom, lol. Patrick is 100% My Favourite, but seriously. The kid most people write? Would not survive being Pete Wentz's best anything for ten years, and/or wouldn't be Pete Wentz's best anything in the first place. I really think their quasi-codependence goes both ways--Pete does something for Patrick, makes Patrick make sense to himself or have a purpose or something, that's just as important as the things Patrick does for Pete.

*points up* THAT was a tangent.

Anyway, thank you so much for reading. I'm really glad you like it :)

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