[Fic] Sophomore Year, Chapter 11

Feb 18, 2008 22:24

I was working on a birthday drabble, but it kept getting too waffy and unrealistic or too angsty ^^;; So I'm posting the chapter I worked on this weekend instead... Maybe I'll make a continuation of my first Changmin bday fic...

Sophomore Year )

#jaemin, ^sophomore year, !fanfic

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kittypoker February 19 2008, 04:00:44 UTC
Ack! I really should be getting to bed, but you totally hindered that with your oh so lovely update!

Love how you made Jae and Min react when they are talking! It's wonderful! Ooo! They are going to stay in a bed forever and ever and ever when Jae gets back? That just sounds awesome.... they so totally should!

Dun dun dun! Time to talk to Kibum, Min! Be brave! You can do it!

And now I'm getting waaaaay too much into this... I shall leave now before I fall farther into it!

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azurehook February 19 2008, 14:35:28 UTC
hahah, I'm ebil? XD

I wasn't sure on the JaeMin interactions here... I feel like they're the most OOC in this arc, but wanted them to be a mix of silly and serious. Eh, it's AU so I guess it's okay if I stretch their characters a bit? Mmm, and a bit of waffiness too, true!

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying :DDD

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kittypoker February 19 2008, 22:31:08 UTC
Yes ebil! XD

Its fine! That's why its AU right?

I'm glad your righting this!

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kittypoker February 19 2008, 22:31:31 UTC
Writing not righting... xD

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kurogoma February 21 2008, 06:04:46 UTC

i really need to check back more often, i am so behind on sophomore year >__<

i love how min is honest and upfront about the kibum kiss with jaejoong. i get really bummed when people try to ignore these things hoping they'll never come up again but things like that always pop up when one least expect it, and never in a good way.

so yeah, love their open honest relationship. and jaejoong's handling of it.

the jaemin needs to do major cybering, but then again ... ....I'll be back in a week. And then we will stay in bed forever and ever and ever. XDD

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azurehook February 21 2008, 23:03:37 UTC
Hello! haha, no problem. I... don't tend to update this arc too often, but I'm trying to get better. it has been two years since I started it after all -_-;;

Yeah, I feel like Min wouldn't be the type to want to ignore things like that. He'd be upfront, I think. and it's true -- honesty is so key in any relationship.

hahah, I'm so new on the cybering concept. It's definitely fun to play around with though.

Thanks for reading! also, it's random, but I was intrigued by your username and clicked your profile (I'm not trying to be sketchy here or anything) and noticed you are in my mom's hometown! How is Kyushu treating you? I've only been there once when I was very little...

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kurogoma February 23 2008, 06:08:14 UTC

oh, yes kyushu is lovely. hakata is where i am based right now, has been for the past few months and i really liked it. i hope i get to stay on alittle longer. will see... ^____^

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azurehook February 23 2008, 07:26:23 UTC
mecha urayamashii! man, I wish I could go to Japan too ^^ The last time I went was 12 years ago, sadly.

maybe you can see the boys in Fukuoka on their arena tour XD I think they'll be there April 1? good times~~

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milena_1980 February 21 2008, 21:45:13 UTC
*Finally I'm able to catch up!!! Yay!!!! ^_~*

Oh, wow, I was wondering about Kibum's attitude. Changmin makes me so sad, missing Jae and feeling all guilty even thought it wasn't really his fault.:(

And I love Heechul! ♥

I'm really glad you updated! ♥

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azurehook February 21 2008, 23:16:32 UTC
hahah, hello~~!! I know, this fic is getting so much longer than I ever expected ^^;;. I started it to organize my thoughts on things that had happened to me and then it just exploded into something else.

Yeah, Changmin's worried since it's his first serious relationship. But it will get better ^_^

I haven't written much on the SuJu boys before, so I hope they're not too horribly OOC. Heechul always intrigued me -- he can be so random and silly sometimes but very serious and intense other times. He's like a cross between Jaejoong and Changmin, I think.

Hopefully, I can update more consistently ^^;;

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milena_1980 February 22 2008, 00:43:47 UTC
^^ Hehe, Yay for us readers lol

JaeMin's relationship is just so cute. I hope it does get better ^^

Well, Kibum *is* famous for being serious and shy, and yes, I completely agree that Heechul is kind of a mix between Jaejoong and Changmin! There's a radio clip somewhere...I'll try to post it on the dbsk_suju comm, where the boys talk about Changmin and Heechul being very similar. And I think they are, in that they're concerned with being proper in certain situations, but they're not afraid to speak out their mind. But Heechul is also very impulsive and random like Jaejoong :D

I hope you can! I can't wait to see what will happen next ^_^

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azurehook February 22 2008, 14:06:38 UTC
oh! I think I've seen that clip-- I will go check it out :DD But yeah, I agree with your analysis. I just wish we could've seen more backstage interactions during EHB. I'm sure there were tons of funny, cute moments.

This is such a go-with-the-flow style, so hopefully it will end up being cohesive in the end ^^;;

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changminiminmin February 28 2008, 05:41:53 UTC
pshhhh it will be good if changmin have cheated on jae xD ..... update soooooooooooooonnnn =)

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azurehook March 13 2008, 13:42:31 UTC
drrr, did LJ mess up my e-mail alerts again?! >_<

mmm, I don't think he really sees Kibum in that way... but maybe in another story ^^

I wrote a draft of the next chappie and can't find it TToTT have to go back and think of how I was going to frame it. *sigh*

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boojaelove March 21 2008, 05:43:51 UTC
this story has been soo great! I really love it... I found it when I was going through the archives...somewhere in Sept 2006? You kpet at it though! And it's lovely. please continue! *chu*

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azurehook March 22 2008, 08:38:28 UTC
Hello~! oh wow, you really went back ^^ I'm glad you enjoy it :DD

inorite? It's already been two years O.O crazy! but now, i'm stuck at a scene trying to figure out how to write it out. I am working on it, but it's going to take me some time ^^;;

Thank you for reading!!

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