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the breakdown of metaphor (2/3)

Oct 14, 2006 18:00

Title: the breakdown of metaphor (2/3)
Author: azuredamsel
Pairings: House/Wilson, House/Cameron, Wilson/Cameron, House/Wilson/Cameron
Rating: R
Word Count: 1213
Summary: Sometimes it hits you that you have no idea what you want. (Three years ago you could've said it was to be a brilliant immunologist.) All metaphors break down somewhere.
Notes: For fated_addiction, because ( Read more... )

the breakdown of metaphor, house/cameron/wilson, request

Comments 22

fated_addiction October 14 2006, 23:16:12 UTC

FIRST. (hope)

fated_addiction October 14 2006, 23:29:54 UTC

God, this is hot.

I mean. God.

I love your Cameron-voice. There's a range of everything in her. And she's very much in touch with the emotion spectrum that sometimes haunts her. Again, your flow is just beautiful. Everything connects and reconnects fantastically.

Brilliant. ♥

synecdoche October 15 2006, 17:15:27 UTC

Aww, thanks. :) I'm so thrilled you're enjoying this; it's been really fun to write. Especially this chapter, because Cameron is just too interesting a character.

♥

synecdoche October 15 2006, 17:14:27 UTC

Haha, you win. :)

leiascully October 14 2006, 23:43:57 UTC

Very nice! I approve of your Cameron (and oh, I hardly ever approve of Cameron because she is so poorly used on the show). And it's delicious, too. I love the asymptote metaphor and the almost-domesticity and how easy Wilson is with the whole situation (sort of).

One small note: "But you have up thirty-six months ago" doesn't really make sense.

synecdoche October 15 2006, 17:17:47 UTC

Thanks! (And thanks for pointing out the typo; I went back and corrected it. It was supposed to be "gave up" instead...)

I'm really glad you enjoyed this -- especially Cameron. I think that for the most part a lot of her inconsistencies on the show would make sense if they developed her character a little more. Oh well, maybe more this season?

Thanks for reading!

leiascully October 15 2006, 21:52:14 UTC

On the one hand, it would be great if they developed her character more this season. On the other hand, I'm so tired of seeing her poorly used that she just irritates me most of the time that she's on screen, especially this season when they play up her nosy and stubborn sides and forget she's a good doctor. At this point I'd really prefer more Chase, Cuddy, and Wilson. So it goes.

Cheers!

bironic October 14 2006, 23:54:02 UTC

Love. The conflicts, the reawakening desires, the way you pinpoint these tiny so-hot details -- the tongue on the toe (and I don't even usually like mentions of toes) -- Wilson's tongue curling -- and the flashbacks -- and we can see a whole tableau, a whole story, behind them -- mm.

synecdoche October 15 2006, 17:19:16 UTC

Thanks! It's kind of funny, because a lot of the details you pointed out were the result of a lot of banging my head against the desk, trying to figure out exactly what I meant to write. So I'm very glad that wasn't in vain. :)

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synecdoche October 15 2006, 17:20:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm really happy that you enjoyed this. ♥

inlaterdays October 15 2006, 02:02:53 UTC

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