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is the best

Aug 13, 2006 16:39

Title: is the best
Author: azuredamsel
Pairing: House/Cameron, Cameron/dead!husband
Rating: R
Warnings: Miscarriage.
Summary: He never really says, 'I want to have children, Allison,' but a month after their wedding, she can't find any condoms in the apartment. If first is the worst, what about second.
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house/cameron, requests

Comments 48

chasing_house August 13 2006, 22:00:36 UTC

wow i have never been first before woohoo. And I'm actually speechless because this was such a brilliant story and left me feeling very emotional :) ...I'll be back to give a proper review later! But for now i shall just babble- Loved it Loved it Loved it!

synecdoche August 14 2006, 00:14:51 UTC

Wow, no one's ever been excited to be first. :) It makes me smile. Also, I'm thrilled that you liked it so much. ♥

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synecdoche August 14 2006, 00:16:55 UTC

It was fun contrasting the periods -- one request was for a House/Cam one-night-stand that got Cam pregnant, and one was for a Cam backstory about a miscarriage with her husband. I thought about it and realized that they would be fun to combine into one story.
I'm so happy that you enjoyed it, and the key! I have a hard time writing House doing sweet but in-character things, so I'm glad to hear that it worked. :)

kianainhi August 13 2006, 22:23:27 UTC

I loved how you paralleled the past with the present. This is a great Cameron POV story but it would be interesting to read House's POV through all of this.

I LOVE YOUR ICON! diagnosticmad August 13 2006, 23:49:04 UTC

The icon with the magic eight ball is awesome...I want it so badly!

Re: I LOVE YOUR ICON! kianainhi August 14 2006, 02:15:41 UTC

I give total credit to swooshdh who created it. I don't think she'll mind, but you can go to her journal. There's a bunch of icons there.

synecdoche August 14 2006, 00:18:27 UTC

Thanks! For now, I think this is going to stay a one-shot, but I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it. :)

goldenmelisande August 13 2006, 22:31:29 UTC

Okay, you made a pregnancy fic that wasn't overflowing with nauseating fluff. And for that, I applaud you. This was really well done, and true to House's character. Great work!

synecdoche August 14 2006, 00:19:51 UTC

Thanks! I was kind of leery of writing a pregnancy fic, just because it's so easy to make them cliche. And I'm so happy to hear that this wasn't, and so thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it. :)

phdelicious August 13 2006, 22:32:34 UTC

Aw! And the key thing is soo House. The juxtaposition of the time in her life when she was loosing everything with 'now', when she's getting everything she never thought she'd have was perfect.

synecdoche August 14 2006, 00:20:41 UTC

Thanks! Secret: I love writing happy endings, but the goal is to make them plausible.
I'm so happy that you liked it. ♥