of our winter

[synecdoche]

Title: of our winter
Author: azuredamsel
Pairing: House/Cameron
Rating: PG
Warnings: This is set somewhere in the third season of House, so if you haven't finished the second season, you may not want to read.
Summary: Cameron could lie. She could say she doesn't dream about House. Parallel loneliness. Flashbacks.
Disclaimer: House isn't mine.
Notes: This is

Comments

[fresh_tart]

You broke my heart...I'm two weeks into the fandom and already I need a new heart. This is a good sign :D

This was absolutely gorgeous. Your style is simple, but fluid. Every word counted, and your prose never crossed that line - the one that's so easily to slip over - from beautiful to superfluous. Your POV switches were seamless, eased by the parenthetical flashbacks.

Two lines struck me just a little more than the others: What he likes best, sober, is the curve of her shoulders to her neck. In the instant before falling asleep, he wonders how it would feel against his mouth. Wow. Just...so sweet, and so unexpected. And this one: he wonders why Cameron hasn't tried to save him yet. Christ, you just ... I'm out of words. You have a new fan.

[synecdoche]

Aww, you're making me blush. :) I'm so glad you liked it -- I had worried the piece on the whole was too spare, but am happy to see that it worked.
Thanks for this lovely feedback. :D

[fresh_tart]

Thank YOU for the fic. I'm just about to dive into your series, so I'm sure you'll hear from me again.

[wildcatlizzie]

I totally think I'm going to go find a corner and cry now. That was so beautiful, but so bittersweet at the same time. Good job.

[synecdoche]

Thanks! I'm really happy that you liked it, but sorry to hear that it made you sad.

Also, your icon pretty much makes my life. ♥

[wildcatlizzie]

Oh yes. Oliver pwns all. :)

[cheesy_star]

Oh snap peas! That was just brilliant...it reminded me of why I like the characters and of why I liked them together. It also reminded me of how much I can be like Cameron sometimes (which is probably why she's my favorite character lol) which is probably not a good thing. haha but anyway, absolutely beautiful story! :-D

[synecdoche]

I'm so glad you liked it! For a while I've been meaning to write a fic where House and Cam don't end up together by the end. But I was still worried this wouldn't be quite House/Cam enough, you know?
Anyway, thanks for commenting! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. :)

Wonderful writing, as always.

[spud31]

So sad, though. I was already sad and that just didn't help.

Re: Wonderful writing, as always.

[synecdoche]

Aww, I'm sorry. :( But I'm glad you enjoyed and hope you feel better soon. :)

[itallseemssofar]

So sad but so beautiful. Your writing is amazing. :)

[synecdoche]

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it. :D