Shooting Range (5/?)

[synecdoche]

Title: Shooting Range (5/?)
Author: azuredamsel
Pairing: House/Cameron
Rating: R overall. This chapter is probably PG-13.
Warnings: AU post-Hunting (2.07).
Summary: With anyone else she'd brush it off. What if Cameron had called House instead of Chase in Hunting? An alternate universe. A work in progress. Earlier parts (and an FAQ!) can be found here.

Comments

[wildcatlizzie]

Very nice. I've really been enjoying this. Just a bit of continuity: House and Anica were at the OTB bar after nightfall, so it wouldn't be two-thirty in the afternoon. And you forgot the "e" in Foreman somewhere. But other than me being nit-picky, I've been loving this. :)

[synecdoche]

Thanks! And thanks for pointing out the lack of "e" in the one Foreman. :)

As to two thirty -- everything seems to be happening earlier in this AU, so maybe we can put the meeting to that? ;)

[marlonbrando]

I suck with the commentage and the feedback so I'll just say hurry up with the next part, please and thank you.

[synecdoche]

Next part, maybe on Thursday? Hopefully! :)

[n0m_de_plum]

Damn is Anica bitchy! lol

Good chapter.

[synecdoche]

I can't say I'm the biggest Anica fan, but I honestly just added that scene so that Cam would have a few more reasons to diagnose Munchausen's. (I have to admit that I've been trying to re-write a few things that irked me mid-season 2...)

Glad you liked it! :)

[tweester]

This fic is very interesting!!!!!!! foreman's boss... hihi!!! lol

[synecdoche]

Thanks! Yeah -- this chapter's set after The Mistake, so Foreman's boss. :) (But only for another week, in this universe.)

[anonymous]

I love this. Can't wait to read more!
~Janelle