Strange News from Another Star, John-Sherlock & Harry, [3/3]

Aug 10, 2010 23:30

Title: Strange News from Another Star [3/3]
Summary: Part Three. Wherein Sherlock isn’t really a sociopath, John reaches out and a trip to Edinburgh occurs.
Characters: John, Sherlock, Harry, Clara, Lestrade & OCs
Pairing: Harry/Clara, John-Sherlock
Rating: T (just in case)
Notes: Continuation of the story ‘Topical’, in which John has lunch with his ( Read more... )

character: sherlock holmes, character: john watson, fic.sherlock holmes

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ilostmynuts August 10 2010, 23:30:52 UTC
Beautiful, just beautiful.

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azure_horizon August 11 2010, 20:18:42 UTC
Thank you :)

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azure_horizon August 11 2010, 20:19:26 UTC
Thanks :) I wanted to go into the suicide aspect but not too far into it, you know? Then I wasn't sure if I was glossing over it too much and... well. Lol. I'm just glad you liked it :)

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azure_horizon August 11 2010, 20:20:29 UTC
Thank you :) I tried to level out the heart break with the friendship & Sherlock's emerging... otherness, lol. Glad you enjoyed it :)

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mandy_croyance August 11 2010, 03:20:59 UTC
Stunning story. I had a hard time describing it for my delicious without giving the most important bits away because this is a story about emotion more than anything and you managed to convey so many with such complexity, how am I supposed to summarize all that in 500 characters?

I really enjoyed your Clara and her relationship with John. Almost as much as I enjoyed Sherlock's. The scenes on the train with him attempting to support John emotionally were really quite wonderful and speak so many volumes about their friendship.

ETA: The airplane case still has me intrigued. I know Sherlock settled on coincidence but I think revisiting it would be a wonderful place to go should you ever want to write a sequel to this.
Just great job over all

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azure_horizon August 11 2010, 20:22:33 UTC
Ahhh, I have plans for another fic that I was considering writing as a sequel, to include Moriarty... I think I will. But will the plane come into it? Maybe, who knows... :p

Thanks so much for your lovely review :D I do better with emotion than I do with action, but I think I managed to not bog it down too much... I hope.

(BTW, what is delicious? lol)

So glad you enjoyed it :D

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mandy_croyance August 12 2010, 00:15:18 UTC
I really hope you do. I would definitely read it.

Delicious is a social bookmarking site that's been adopted by many in fandom to keep track of stories they've enjoyed and rec them to others. It allows you tag entries, include notes (for fic, that's often a summary and/or some commentary), and see who & how many have also saved that webpage. I find it far more functional than LJ's memories and it allows me to save fics posted anywhere on the web. The firefox add-on makes things ridiculously easy too.

You can check out my account here :)

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azure_horizon August 12 2010, 14:35:50 UTC
Oh cool! Thanks, I'll take a look :D
LJ memories is soooo outdated, i think :(

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sangate August 11 2010, 10:02:31 UTC
*squees in delight* You know that eI love how you continued it XD Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :D Love the emotion, from Clara, John ánd Sherlock :) It fitted really well, and aww just awesome awesome awesome :D

And may I just hope to god auntie Sandra's NOT canon?! XD because me being the reason John in the end falls asleep on Sherlock's bed and him TUCKING HIM IN is an image I'd love to cherish for ever and ever XD (and can I admit I squeed quite loudly for the entirety of the fic after that? a bit too much perhaps? :D)

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azure_horizon August 11 2010, 20:24:06 UTC
Hahaha, auntie Sandra is not canon. I lol-ed when I came up with the name because it sounds Scottish and yet... :p

Hahahaha, tucking him in :p Yes, he definitely did. Was it shippy enough? NO? Oh, well, will need to rectify that next time around, hm? LOL.

Thanks for reading (again) :D I'm very, very glad you enjoyed it :D

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sangate August 12 2010, 07:59:34 UTC
haha pfew XD and yet what?! What missy?! :P

Damn straight it was shippy enough :D But still, if people don't ship them, I don't think they took offense on it (off it? over it? :P)

But still.. the shippier the better :D And I really think you are extremelly good with emotions in character that you can pull it off, even with these characters :D

NP :D I diiiiiiid :D

*UNF* you icon..

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azure_horizon August 12 2010, 14:34:51 UTC
And yet is also your name :p xx

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