Wow, you somehow managed to take a pairing I never would have imagined and bring them together in a very real (and painful) way. Dean's attempts at proving Fred is actually a demon were great, and I loved that Illryia sacrificed herself to save Sam and bring back Dean. Just a lovely read.
I can't even begin to tell you how much your review just tickled me with glee!
I am so happy, I giggled - it was scary, that you got that Illyria sacrificed herself. *beams like crazy* I didn't write it out - I didn't spell it out for everyone, but Illyria's death was my intention. So thank you, for getting that.
Sam and Illyria/Fred is an odd pairing. I'm sure I could make it work, past what I just wrote, but it would require some more work and some more backstory I think.
And poor Dean, he knows something is wrong with Fred, and he just can't seem to prove it.
So again, thank you for the review!! You truly made me beam.
Magnificent. There were several places where I could've done with exposition and more dialogue/action, but the concept was seamlessly presented. And poor Dean, getting his ass kicked left, right, and center. ;D
I needed comedy and nothing is funnier than having Dean get his ass kicked. Not that I like him to get injured, but seriously, getting his ass kicked by a girl. It's hilarious like River kicking Jayne's ass in Firefly/Serenity.
I'm interested to know which areas you would have liked more exposition and dialogue/action. The way I wrote this just kinda bounced from place to place (as you can tell) but that was the style I was going for. But, name a place or two, or three, and I might be able to flush it out a little.
I just love your icon - that is such a great picture of Ruby/Katie!
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I am so happy, I giggled - it was scary, that you got that Illyria sacrificed herself. *beams like crazy* I didn't write it out - I didn't spell it out for everyone, but Illyria's death was my intention. So thank you, for getting that.
Sam and Illyria/Fred is an odd pairing. I'm sure I could make it work, past what I just wrote, but it would require some more work and some more backstory I think.
And poor Dean, he knows something is wrong with Fred, and he just can't seem to prove it.
So again, thank you for the review!! You truly made me beam.
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I needed comedy and nothing is funnier than having Dean get his ass kicked. Not that I like him to get injured, but seriously, getting his ass kicked by a girl. It's hilarious like River kicking Jayne's ass in Firefly/Serenity.
I'm interested to know which areas you would have liked more exposition and dialogue/action. The way I wrote this just kinda bounced from place to place (as you can tell) but that was the style I was going for. But, name a place or two, or three, and I might be able to flush it out a little.
I just love your icon - that is such a great picture of Ruby/Katie!
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Sam/Fred/Illyria was something I really wanted to see and I had to search for one I loved. This was it. Very nice.
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