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_fullofgrace December 31 2007, 04:10:35 UTC
Wow, you somehow managed to take a pairing I never would have imagined and bring them together in a very real (and painful) way. Dean's attempts at proving Fred is actually a demon were great, and I loved that Illryia sacrificed herself to save Sam and bring back Dean. Just a lovely read.

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azraelz_angel December 31 2007, 13:34:19 UTC
I can't even begin to tell you how much your review just tickled me with glee!

I am so happy, I giggled - it was scary, that you got that Illyria sacrificed herself. *beams like crazy* I didn't write it out - I didn't spell it out for everyone, but Illyria's death was my intention. So thank you, for getting that.

Sam and Illyria/Fred is an odd pairing. I'm sure I could make it work, past what I just wrote, but it would require some more work and some more backstory I think.

And poor Dean, he knows something is wrong with Fred, and he just can't seem to prove it.

So again, thank you for the review!! You truly made me beam.

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mercurybard December 31 2007, 06:11:23 UTC
Magnificent. There were several places where I could've done with exposition and more dialogue/action, but the concept was seamlessly presented. And poor Dean, getting his ass kicked left, right, and center. ;D

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azraelz_angel December 31 2007, 13:29:14 UTC
Thank you!

I needed comedy and nothing is funnier than having Dean get his ass kicked. Not that I like him to get injured, but seriously, getting his ass kicked by a girl. It's hilarious like River kicking Jayne's ass in Firefly/Serenity.

I'm interested to know which areas you would have liked more exposition and dialogue/action. The way I wrote this just kinda bounced from place to place (as you can tell) but that was the style I was going for. But, name a place or two, or three, and I might be able to flush it out a little.

I just love your icon - that is such a great picture of Ruby/Katie!

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kelly_girl December 31 2007, 07:13:51 UTC
Interesting pairing. I liked the back and forth thru time and Dean trying to prove Illyria was a demon. Loved the end with Illyria fighting Ruby.

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azraelz_angel December 31 2007, 13:30:35 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it worked out well and that you enjoyed it. And yeah, Illyria versus Ruby is one hell of a fight.

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denisitap December 31 2007, 07:17:24 UTC
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!

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azraelz_angel December 31 2007, 13:29:29 UTC
Thank you! *beams*

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roguegambit26 January 19 2008, 20:27:51 UTC
Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I was asked to make a few crossover recs so I rec'd To Walk This World here.

Sam/Fred/Illyria was something I really wanted to see and I had to search for one I loved. This was it. Very nice.

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