Comments | ayumi_nb: Narnia Fic: "all over again"

ayumi_nb

Narnia Fic: "all over again"

Jan 10, 2011 20:00

Here is another request. This one is for sunrunnersioned, I hope you like it my friend!!!

Title: "all over again"
Beta: no one
Rating: PG-13
Words: 2,200
Characters/Pairings: Peter/Susan, (Edmund/Lucy) if you squint, (Eustace), OCs
Theme/Prompt: #96, dance. Table's HERE
Warnings/AN: Incest.
Summary: “May I have this dance, Your Majesty?”
Disclaimer: The usual.

( The end of the music put an end to her memories and she was no longer in the promised land but back on earth... )

ship: peter/susan, ff: oneshots, ff: aus, character: edmund pevensie, rating: pg-13, character: peter pevensie, ff: narnia - au, fandom: narnia, ship: edmund/lucy, character: lucy pevensie, themed comms: fanfic100, ff: narnia - book!verse, character: susan pevensie, ff: narnia - vdt

Comments 7

sunrunnersioned January 11 2011, 00:46:04 UTC

wow this was such a great fic. As you know I am a huge fan of yours but I love how you write these two. You seem to understand the passion and guilt and write in all in one word. Just perfect. So sweet and romantic, yet serious and incredibly intense all at the same time. I just love it. Great job! Thank you so much for fulfilling this request!!!

ayumi_nb January 11 2011, 18:52:50 UTC

hoo, i am so glad you liked it! =D i would've posted it sooner, but i was having problems with the end.

and thanks for all the compliments, i just try to do my best *^^*

anonymous March 2 2011, 20:31:56 UTC

So lovely!
Thank you for sharing a happy story.

ayumi_nb March 4 2011, 00:15:36 UTC

no prob

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ayumi_nb May 13 2011, 02:17:49 UTC

thanks for commenting =D

sunrunnersioned June 26 2011, 18:50:35 UTC

hey hun i just wanted to let you know that I made a peter/susan tumbler and have made a post((it will be posted within a few weeks)) directing everyone to you're awesome fanfics! Hope that is ok!

ayumi_nb June 26 2011, 19:42:47 UTC

it's ok, i don't mind the advertising XD