Narnia Fic: "So, It Begins"

[ayumi_nb]

Another P/S fic...

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Title: "So, It Begins"
Beta: No one
Rating: R
Words: 1,492
Characters: Susan, Peter
Pairings: Peter/Susan
Theme/Prompt: For the Peter/Susan Prompts, "skinny-dipping" suggested by time8turner
Warnings: Nudity, adult themes, and incest of course
Disclaimer: Narnia (c) C. S. Lewis. Plot (c) Me
A/N: Takes place during the Golden

Comments

[katherine_lupin]

awesome!! as always!! ;) Happy Valentine's Day!!

[ayumi_nb]

thanks, and happy valentine's day to you too!

[ayumi_nb]

thank you!

[sunrunnersioned]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I loved it!!!! Eekkk you are driving me crazy...the more I read the more I want to write!!! STOPPP I have homework. But seriously...AMAZING!!!

[ayumi_nb]

thanks!

and go do your homework, or you'll regret it later XD trust me, i've been through that already

[kanjo_girl]

Again, your style still captivates me. I love how you didn't have to end it in total lemon and sex-story--you decided to end with her conclusion and that was great.

One of the things I enjoyed was his realization at the situation, how he finally saw her.

lol, it took skinny-dipping for him to see it.

There was a little thing, where it describes the pond, there is a parentheses before the word "deep". But that's it.

Thanks for sharin.

[ayumi_nb]

thanks, i thought about putting the lemon, but i wanted it fluffy and as innocent as it could go considering the situation, so i left it there, i'm glad you like it that way

and i forgot the other parentheses XD, i fixed it now

[oxford_prone]

This is absolutely great. Please continue to write P/S fics, I'm a huge fan. :)

[ayumi_nb]

thanks, and I will as long as i have time

Prompts! UPDATE

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Re: Prompts! UPDATE

[ayumi_nb]

uhhhh, okay?