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ayslin

Fic: at length did cross an albatross, Parts 1&2/?

Jul 27, 2009 01:07

Title: at length did cross an albatross (Parts 1&2/?)
Author: Me :)
Rating: pg (kirk has a bit of a potty mouth)
Pairing: K/S
Summary: The Enterprise's crew is forced to relive their darkest memories. Fun times? Not so much.
Word Count: 2018 for the two.
Disclaimer: I don't even own the action figures.
A/N: Written for the 'Kirk must cry!' prompt ( Read more... )

st fic, spock, prompt, kirk, aldcaa, fic, angst, comment fic, word count: 5000-10000, kirk/spock, mccoy

Comments 32

clancy_s July 27 2009, 11:37:29 UTC

I'll be interested to see how this develops - how they get out of it as well as how you take it to Kirk / Spock.

One thing in the setup really distracted me although it's peripheral to the story - the idea of them dashing about between galaxies. In TOS they made a big thing about not being able to get out of our galaxy because of an 'energy barrier' and because it would take 10s of generations to get there even at max warp.

In reboot getting around seems to take about the same time. rhaegal explains the scale of things much better than I can, here:

http://rhaegal.dreamwidth.org/12029.html

ayslin July 27 2009, 12:17:50 UTC

I think my n00bness is showing. Whoops.

Thanks for pointing that out. I'll nix galaxy and go with sector. Or something.

illariy July 27 2009, 12:23:36 UTC

*is reading with interest* :D

ayslin July 28 2009, 01:08:06 UTC

*is SO glad you're interested!* :))

downjune July 27 2009, 13:04:40 UTC

Exciting! I look forward to more! And the techy stuff? yeah, I worry about that, too. We n00b writers need a resource list. (I may post about this, actually)

ayslin July 28 2009, 01:14:08 UTC

:) Thanks! I'm so happy you like it.

Bah, I know. Rocket scientists are rolling in their graves, what with the claims I've made in this fic. A resource list is a fantastic idea!

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ayslin July 28 2009, 01:19:00 UTC

I'll definitely be continuing - because you're right; Spock will not be leaving that alone. Not by a long shot. :) Part 3 is pretty much outlined with odd phrases/conversations that wouldn't go away until I put them to paper. Just need to color in the blank spaces.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.

morganoconner July 27 2009, 13:42:47 UTC

Oooh, intriguing! Definitely looking forward to more. :)

ayslin July 28 2009, 01:20:16 UTC

I'm SO glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know. :)