The Dallas Deception: Part 3

Aug 28, 2007 14:58


Part 2

The present…
August 4, 2007

“Hey. You’re awake.”

At the sound of Jensen’s voice, Jared nearly squeaks. He had no idea that Jensen was sitting right there in the room with him.

And he’s in Jensen’s bed, at Jensen's cabin on the lake.  Naked.

Jensen nods in Jared’s direction. “Relax. I didn’t do anything ungentlemanly.”

Jared gathers the ( Read more... )

harlequin, jared/jensen fic, rps fic

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mickeym August 29 2007, 04:11:53 UTC
Good lord, woman. I got to the scholarship and note, and started crying. GEEZ. I love this story. I want to marry it and have it's schmoopy little babies. Only one part left! *sniffles*

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aynslee August 29 2007, 15:55:04 UTC
Oh man, I'm glad you liked that part! All that just wrote itself once I knew what Jared's background was going to be. Thanks so much, god, that makes my day! :D

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aynslee August 29 2007, 15:56:14 UTC
Oh, thanks! I'm so glad you liked the scholarship part--it just sort of wrote itself once I knew Jared's background. Poor boy! :)

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shelgrainger2 August 31 2007, 15:00:45 UTC
I am so glad Chris made Jared see the light. I really though they were through. How sweet of Jensen to get his sister the schloarship and I am proud that Jared took it because it would have been selfish of him to refuse. Now let's hope they can be happy lol!

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aynslee September 1 2007, 19:53:06 UTC
Thanks for commenting all the way through! That was awesome. And yes, Jared can't say no to anything for his sister. :D

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9thof9 September 4 2007, 04:18:25 UTC
And the common theme of the comments is the scholarship. It was a wonderful thing.
Jensen remembering all the little details was a nice touch. Why can't real men remember the small things?

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aynslee September 22 2007, 03:23:07 UTC
I'm sorry this is so late, but I hate not replying, lol! Thank you for commenting all the way through--I appreciate that. I'm glad you liked Jensen remembering--too bad all men aren't like that, huh? :D

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120cassie December 14 2009, 17:43:11 UTC
Oh boys... This is killing me.. MUST read on..

Hugs
Julie

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