tomodachi - III. Smiling

May 31, 2011 22:23


~友達~
~tomodachi~

III. Smiling

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k8: ryo nishikido, type: chaptered, fic: tomodachi, k8: tadayoshi ohkura

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askina_spn June 2 2011, 11:51:44 UTC
"Or is it just that you’re frustrated that my friend has managed to teach me something, proving a mere college freshman to be a better teacher than you?”
Ryo!!! Kakkoi!!! xD
Really, someone has to hit this teacher. With something heavy. In the head xD

That scene with the little girl was too cute in your fic too xD
I love the way Ryo defended Ohkura.
Keep reading.
Thank you~

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ayang902 June 4 2011, 14:24:51 UTC
ahh yush! im glad i was able to make him awesome like he really is ;)
HAHAHAHAH YESH. do it! lol xD
aww thanks! i just love ryo being adorable with kids <3 ^^
*nods* ryohkura!! haha
thank you for reading and commenting! :3

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jessicaluthien June 2 2011, 14:04:35 UTC
Oooohh...Cliffhanger! XD I really want to know what's going on between the teacher and Ryo...For now, it just seems like they hate each other...for no apparent reason. ^^;; I wonder if there's some interesting back story to go along with their horrible relationship. ;)
Anyways, it was so cute for Ryo to defend Tacchon like that! I wasn't expecting for Ryo to have taken THAT much of a liking to him yet! XD Yay for growing friendships! ^^
Anways, great job with this chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next!

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ayang902 June 4 2011, 14:31:53 UTC
hahaha yay? *nods* there is a reason.. well sort of. but its not a very pleasant one >< not really a back story (tried that, but FAILED. LOL) but its something im gonna have to apologize to ryo for =___=
hah! speedy fic time? lol! the next chapter is even MORE sped up. (maybe thats not a good thing..) but it seemed like a good time for tension :]
thanks! and thank you for reading and commenting as always~ ^^

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decemberpie June 4 2011, 15:30:07 UTC
Everyone who writes RyOhkura should be praised, especially if the story is interesting like your's! :D

And yes, I did notice the reference. ;)
And maybe you didn't do it deliberately but I also thought of "Wahaha" when I read the "if you smile, then someone else will smile, too". :3

Update sooooon~~~! <3

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ayang902 June 4 2011, 15:36:42 UTC
aww thanks! but yesh, we need more ryohkura <3! ^^

hahaha yayy! :3
lol! i did!! but i didnt know anyone would notice.. hehe im glad you pointed that out! ^^
ooh i already did~
thanks for reading and commenting! :D

have i mentioned i love your ohkura icon? X3

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decemberpie June 5 2011, 13:50:32 UTC
I love it too~!

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ayang902 June 5 2011, 17:46:47 UTC
hahaha omg yeshh :3

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jellybean6972 June 6 2011, 00:26:54 UTC
Wah~ I didn't even know you posted this until you posted IV! @.@

Anyways, I loved this chapter! ♥
The cafe part was so cute and sweet! With the little girl and when Ohkura told Ryo to smile more :)
The way Ryo talked to his teacher and protected Ohkura was really sweet and you can tell he cares for Ohkura already! X3
That teacher is just... >.

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ayang902 June 7 2011, 03:20:20 UTC
darn! that means im bad at advertising.. LOL xDD

yay thank you!!
*nods* aww ryo's just being sweet, ne? and protective x3 i wanted him to not just be like an emotionless, angry kid sitting at the back of the room hahaha xD
arghh i agree, he's horrible! (lol even though i wrote him.. >.>)
thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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