the sacrament

[ayame_hadouken]

Title: The Sacrament
Pairing/Group: Ueda Tatsuya/Nakamaru Yuichi
Rating/Warnings: NC-17; Monster Night PV AU, blood and monsters
Word Count: 1446
Summary: Yuichi has never been a fan of dinner parties.
Notes: Written for chuckles0505 for the jpnforph fundraiser.
[even more notes]
Many thanks to the ever-excellent je_levy for keeping me in line, and for also writing in this universe, and for

Comments

[je_levy]

I wanted to supply an appropriate gif to congratulate your finishing and overcoming your writer's block but this is all i could find.

[ayame_hadouken]

i accept your sex cake; let us share a bowl of lucky charms in celebration

thank you so much, for everything, and ilu2

i can't wait either for our futurecrime

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

[dusk037]

I. You. Ngh *__________* /dead

[ayame_hadouken]

>:3

[chuckles0505]

I love that Yuichi became immortal too and moreover a vampire (I love how you never really stated what Yuichi became either but dropped details here and there <3).
It somehow seems so apt for them, a wolf and a vampire xD

Some parts I particularly enjoyed:
Yuichi hadn't dared look anyone in the eye; he'd accidentally done it once and the wretched thing had disappeared abruptly. So had Tatsuya; there had been an unmistakable and bone-chilling howl, and after a lengthy silence, only Tatsuya had returned.
Omg, never mess with Tatsuya

“You’d best hurry,” Yuichi murmured, drawing one thumb along the red slash scrawled across Tatsuya’s cheek. “Or do you want me to tear this open? I am a little parched.”

That earned him a low growl, almost a laugh, that shook him to the core. Tatsuya lifted his head and leaned into Yuichi’s palm, wicked as he answered. “I’d like for you to try.”
The banter here is beyond excellent. I always love it when they are being cheeky with each other xD

had even resented Tatsuya and his greedy wish for forever

[ayame_hadouken]

(I love how you never really stated what Yuichi became either but dropped details here and there <3)

augh, i'm glad. i was very worried that it wouldn't come across; i figured that within the framework that levy had started to establish before i got this prompt was that ue-wolf wouldn't be satisfied with not being able to keep what he considers rightfully his for only a short time, so then pow! vampires happened. >:3

Omg, never mess with Tatsuya

yeah, he's pretty hardcore; i wouldn't wanna mess with him

The banter here is beyond excellent. I always love it when they are being cheeky with each other xD

thank you! i love it when the dialogue is fun because i always wonder if it's too stiff or awkward or you know, dialogue-angst, i have it.

This reminds me that Ueda mentioned before in a magazine something along the lines that if he were immortal, his friends would have to live forever too xDoh wow :o he does sound greedy, then