Good story! Pathos, rising action, a climax, and breaking away from the happy ending cliché. Sometimes I appear to not actually care for people and their injuries/emotions when I reply to their posts. I am a bad man.
Ayyy-I hope that healskastehelmiFebruary 1 2005, 19:48:22 UTC
An artist troubled by something seemingly so small as a hungry extremity-I have yet for soemthing like this to happen to me-SORRY-sounded terrible-but they're right-you should enter the story at POETRY.COM and call it a poem. Har. They're assholes-maybe they'll give you 1000$$$....good luck....
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