One-shot: The First Time I Say ‘I love you’ To You

[axel1409]

Title : The First Time I Say ‘I love you’ To You

Author : Axel1409

Pairing : Onkey

Rating : PG-15

Genre : Angst(here and there), Fluff(where there’s no angst)

Disclaimer : I only own the plot - this is purely fictional

Summary :  A one-shot for Valentine’s Day-the title said it all.

Warning :  A slight angst fic with minor violence.  But I promise that

Comments

[1akane6]

Woooa~
Is it ypur first fic or no..??

The end was sooooooo good..^^

Love it..^-^

[axel1409]

Yeah..this is my 1st fic posted ^^ and 2nd fic i wrote. i just had to give a happy ending for all the characters-after all it's Valentine's Day, right?
And, glad that you enjoyed reading it :)

[axel1409]

Hahas~ Just gotta make Jinki the hero and Kibum the princess/prince ^^ thx for reading~

[omiichan]

ill give you bunny as much as u want, cause im so in love with this.. >w<

remember seeing ur lj and so happy that u finally..post a fic.. and its good, god, its good.. i want more and cant wait for more from you xDD~~ *squeal*

liking the plot really.. and our bummie, so sad seeing him like this..

the angst, gah~ just perfect..!!

i just realize that the 3 behind onew is others members after reading other's comment, cause im little confused at that scene before xDD

loving jinki with his chicken band-aid, yellow letters, the sweet stalking, and the help and how he could read kibum's mind..

cant wait for more onkey from you,
will waiting ^^~ <3

[axel1409]

thx for reading and for all your sweet comments ^^ that's really nice of you~! hehe~ i'm just posting at random-so i'll post whenever i'm free ^^

[adyaby]

awww this is so sad TT____TT
but cute at the same time =')
dubu's such a nice person ~<333
& the ending omggg!!! *cries*
love this!!

[axel1409]

Thx for reading ^^ and glad you like it!
just had to make Jinki a good guy and the hero here :D

[manongeunhyuk]

Yay for having written a wonderful first fic! :D
wow it's so sweet but at the same time sad since Kibum had to endure those harsh beatings made by his mom :( At least Jinki/Onew is there to rescue him! The ending was also perfect! ♥
Hope you'll make more in the future ^____^

[axel1409]

Thx for reading and for the sweet comments <3 i'll try to write more in the future if time allows me to :D