Generically Speaking

Aug 16, 2014 15:22

A/N: To be honest, I don’t like the way Suho is always associated with the money-craze, naggy-ahjumma personality, or how Kris only cares about his look in most fanfictions, so maybe you’ll find them to be out of characters in this one-shot. As usual, no beta, no proofread. I wrote the first words that came to mind, so the words tend to be immature ( Read more... )

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hipployta August 16 2014, 09:23:38 UTC
9 years...and he just walked away after they fully decorated the house, leaving the keys, without saying goodbye...Joonmyeon that was fear of commitment and being in love in the worse way and your job was an excuse. You lived with the others but ran away from him...and 9 years later you cried in the bathroom over it...hello!

At least coincidence, or fate, was on their side

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benniot_91 August 17 2014, 05:48:10 UTC
well insecurities are bitches.

thanks for reading, darling! ^^

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mae1515 August 16 2014, 12:33:06 UTC
i was skim-reading this; in no mood to read. but i should leave it here before my proper comment.

“Well at least we got the sofa.”

this, is the most important, people.

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benniot_91 August 17 2014, 05:50:46 UTC
it is! :)

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taurusme August 16 2014, 23:47:09 UTC
I hv always loved slice-of-life fic more compared to the fluff ones. This story is grounded by reality. I like how Joonmyeon had relationships with both genders - how he didn't even know he could hv any sort of sexual attraction towards the same gender. Another thing authornim, for me it is refreshing to see Joonmyeon and Yifan being potrayed in such a way, there is no such thing as OOC because in the end we did not know their true personalities. The one we saw up until now are only their on-screen personalities. Who knows if Joonmyeon did curse a lot? Surely not us. Another thing, please please pliiiiiiiiiiz write more krisho.

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benniot_91 August 17 2014, 05:56:35 UTC
i've long lost the ability to write fluff to be honest (used to write a lot of it with Suju once). well i take that as a compliment, and sure, i'm writing more of them in the future.

thanks again for reading and for this lovely comment, darling ^^

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lizzyu August 17 2014, 04:31:31 UTC
i really love this.
i like how junmyeon is so skeptical towards unconditional love, and not believing that someone can love all of him
and the fact that he is not wary of dating, but is just apprehensive when he needs to change himself to suit his partner is so so relatable.

junmyeon cursing during video games session is cute. after all, i think only a saint won't do that haha

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benniot_91 August 17 2014, 06:03:27 UTC
hahaha you could say this was inspired by my own experience. really, if someone can't accept the real you, there's no need to put up with them.

everyone's a sailor when it comes to gaming. :P

thanks for reading and loving this ^^

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lizzyu August 18 2014, 12:17:17 UTC
yep, i agree!

even though i think that making some changes is necessary in a relationship since it is pretty much impossible to find someone that matches you perfectly. as long as, you don't lose yourself in the process

i hope you've found your happiness like junmyeon in this story (:

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rikli August 22 2014, 23:09:56 UTC
ahh it was really
real
and my krisho heart was a bit broken but then put back together
i loved it <3

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