and I fit in somewhere

[awewonder]

In my dining room by the cases lined with foreign shot glasses, and to the right of the plant my grandmother has been growing since the beginning of my time, is a window. A big one that, never has blinds or curtains to shield it. These are eyes no one wants to shut out. These eyes scan my suburbia, city life, my town tucked away with the mountains

Comments

[musichick]

beautiful.

i can picture every line, every box, every detail.
and not because i, have looked out of that window with my own eyes, but because i can see what's outside that window through your eyes.

well done, my dear.

[awewonder]

thank ya. Just trying to get back into the habit of writing stuff NOT about what I did today.

[the_original_me]

You write beautifully.

XOXO

[awewonder]

thankya!

[totalnsyncgirl3]

that is really beautiful!

[awewonder]

the view is very beautiful, I had to do it justice =)

[sweetmiss]

beyond beautiful.

...reminds me of Daly City where I had wonderful childhood memories <3

[awewonder]

Daly City is what I'm talking about!

[sweetmiss]

whoa! then you must know the donut school ! LOL. i went to Tobias (6th grade) and Ben Franklin (8th grade)! HOW COOL!

.. i miss Daly City and how people say "hella!"

[awewonder]

i actually have no idea what school those are.. strange huh?

but yes, the hella lives on.. lol whered u move away to?

[spunkysparkler]

I really like that. Especially how you ended the story :)

[awewonder]

=)