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awanderingbard

Sherlock/HDM: Visit

Dec 09, 2014 22:49

Title: Visit
Characters: John, Sherlock, Jasmine (OC), daemons
Rating: PG
Warnings/Triggers: recovery from a serious wound, mentions of PTSD symptoms
Spoilers: none
Pairings: none
Word Count 2, 565
Summary: As John and Subira do their physio to aid recovery from John's gunshot wound, Sherlock and Tzophiya drop in to be semi-comforting.
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elements: daemons, fandom: sherlock (bbc), rating: pg, length: oneshot

Comments 8

donutsweeper December 10 2014, 04:50:34 UTC

Yay more daemons!!! Loved it!

awanderingbard December 10 2014, 05:01:10 UTC

Hee, I'm glad it's yay for more daemons and not 'stop with the the daemons already!' :-D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and commenting!

joonscribble December 11 2014, 01:19:31 UTC

Benvolio might be my new favorite thing. I love the descriptions of him bowing at his waist and going piggy back style on Jasmine.

Adorable and I always squee at daemons!

awanderingbard December 11 2014, 01:35:26 UTC

Benvolio might be my new favorite thing. I love the descriptions of him bowing at his waist and going piggy back style on Jasmine.

Oh good! He and Jasmine are my connecting element between the one shots, you'll be seeing more of him.

Thanks for reading and commenting?

aelfgyfu_mead December 12 2014, 02:32:56 UTC

“You respond well to eccentrics.”
I'm afraid it's true!

Sherlock doesn't really know how to be nice, and he's mostly trying not to be. It must be very confusing for him!

awanderingbard December 12 2014, 03:59:54 UTC

It must be very confusing for him!

It's probably more confusing for Tzophiya, who tends to know when Sherlock should be doing something but is never really sure why.

Thanks for commenting1

shadowfireflame January 5 2015, 17:10:20 UTC

Yay, I finally have time to read some stories, and it seems like you’ve been very busy! I’m so pleased! I love reading about the boys and their daemons. Also, you changed your layout! Pretty!

He didn't want him getting too used to solving cases on his own and maybe realizing John wasn't necessary.

Awww, it’s precious that John thinks this. Of course Sherlock would never think this. :)

I love this story because we don’t often get to see characters recovering from trauma so much as receiving it, and there is a lot to work through both mentally and physically. Especially with where John was shot-I’ve had abdominal surgery and know how it affects everything you do; standing up straight was out of the question, but coughing, laughing, and especially sneezing were the absolute worst.

John had literally seen them startle one another, as though they were surprised the other was there.

Ooh, this is interesting and believable.

“I'm not stressed,” Sherlock said, through clenched teeth.Poor Sherlock! I love how he’s always saying he’s “just ( ... )

awanderingbard January 5 2015, 18:06:55 UTC

Yay, I finally have time to read some stories, and it seems like you’ve been very busy! I’m so pleased!

Welcome back! My word count in December was a probably the highest of the whole year, so I apologize for the amount of stories.

Also, you changed your layout! Pretty!

Thanks! I hope it's okay to read on, I haven't posted any stories since I changed it so I don't know if it's hard on the eyes or okay or not.

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :-D