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[awakeunafraid]

Date Night
NC-17; Ryan Ross/Brendon Urie
for jzbell. beta by yankeesdtr

Comments

[simpleconstruct]

Oh, Oh. I really enjoyed that, I like the dynamic when they were all in the room together, especially Spencer and Jon's interactions - and the whole... everything!

“Oh God,” Ryan whispers.

“Not really,” Brendon says. “Blasphemy.” = Totally my favorite part.

Just, yay!

[thewayout]

thank you! :D

i always wanted to write that in a sex scene, so i'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[ryrolovesbden]

Oh hell yes, this rocks. Going into memories! =P

[thewayout]

thank you! :D

[self_sustaining]

I adored this whole fic. The characterizations, the interactions, the diction, dialouge, everything.
Thank you very, very much for actually writing intelligent porn in this fandom.

It’s Brendon’s fingers creeping across Ryan’s palms, the tips and pads of fingertips calloused and sliding into the spaces between Ryan’s fingers, bringing their palms together, Brendon’s warm and Ryan’s much cooler.
Every time you did that, I loved it. That's the best. lsadjf Just. I love it.

Nice job.

[thewayout]

thank you! and you're welcome. i'm glad that you think it's intelligent, haha.

and thank you. again. for all of that.

[self_sustaining]

Dude. I hardly read anything anymore unless it's recc'd to me or by theaerosolkid, danimpa, castoffstarter, notshybutsly", simpleconstruct or skoosiepants. Most of the newer writers make me want to poke my eyes out. Or teach them grammar and spelling.
But this, bb? This was fantastic.

[thewayout]

i'm the same way -- unless it's posted on dyw or letterbomb___ or rec'd by someone on my flist, i won't read it. or unless i recognise the name, you know?

but thank you. you're a sweetheart.

[clandestine6579]

i loved it
i loved it
i loved it
I LOVED IT
did i get my point across?
i think i did

[thewayout]

i think you did. thank you thank you thank you. :D

[xcandyxninjax]

Aahh I loved it! =DDD
When Ryan and Brendon were being all sneaky in the same room with Jon and Spence was one of the best parts >x3
And blasphemy.. I love that word, and it suited Bren xD
-memory'd!-
<333

[thewayout]

thank you :D