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[awakeunafraid]

Asked What The Damage Was
NC-17; Brendon/Ryan (Pete/Ryan)
for jzbell and tragedy.

Comments

[dandy_fetish]

This was well written and had some interesting ideas explored in it. I would have liked a dub-con warning though, since there's dubious consent in the case of the Ryan/Pete blowjob.

[thewayout]

No there's not. Ryan wanted to do it. Thanks anyway, though.

[dandy_fetish]

I suppose I was confused by his reaction afterwards, then. When he was vomiting and threatening Brendon not to tell anyone I took that as a sign that he didn't really want to do it.

Also, even with that aside, there is the issue where Ryan covers Brendon's mouth during sex when Brendon tells him to stop.

[thewayout]

He was vomiting before Pete arrived as well, and I'm sure that swallowing someone's load when he'd never done it before didn't help him any. Threatening Brendon to not tell anyone is for a completely different reason than you're thinking.

And if you're considering that dubious consent, then you might consider that when Brendon told him to stop before, Ryan did. Please stop looking for something to complain about and go somewhere else, if you've got that big of an issue.

[neery]

That was great! I especially liked the way you showed that this isn't easy at all on Brendon.

[thewayout]

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :D

[rock_my_town]

Wow, so I just found this today and I can't believe I hadn't read it yet. But yeah...Wow. This whole story is just simply amazing. That whole first sex scene I had my hand to mouth and I'm pretty sure I didn't blink.

Such an beautiful and emotional fic...and I think the ending was probably one of the scenes ever!

[thewayout]

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[shadowcat15]

^_^

[thewayout]

:D

[3jane]

Mmph. Wonderful.

[thewayout]

thank you.