Original Fic | Love Lessons - 1/? - NC-17

[avoria]

love lessons
Elliot Webber had learned the hard way that most teachers weren't to be trusted; but then, Max Forsythe wasn't really like most teachers, was he? Rated for strong language and romantic themes.

NC-17
Teacher/Student
Romance, Drama, Friendship, Humour
734 words
This work is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-

Comments

[lunawho]

Oooh. An interesting beginning! A very nice twist on an idea that got cliched by fanfics, lol. Putting this spin on it, has made it an original one.

It's like watching Lolita a while down the line and wondering what she thought after the whole thing with Humbert Humberton (or so I'm guessing. Tbh, I never read that novel, only synopses of it when people were equating Doctor/Rose to the relationship a couple of years ago, lol).

A girl who is playing a game ends up WAY over her head...and no one asks her side of the story. It's sadly a very true tale.

I'm curious to see which thread of this tale will take precedence in your story -- the future meet up of the girl and the man she wronged/was wronged by, her trying to show her side of the tale to the people who want to put a scarlet letter on her chest -- ALL OF IT.

You have truly whet my appetite.

[avoria]

Firstly, thank you so much for taking the time to read this, and doubly so for commenting :)

I've neither read nor seen the adaptation of Lolita, although I've always been strangely drawn to it. It's on my quite extensive 'to-do' list :P

But anyway, thank you for saying this seems like a twist on the cliché. That's kind of what I seem to do; I'm not original enough to completely do things on my own, but I do rather like putting strange spins on stuff that's been done before :) I've got a couple of chapters of this already written, but this is a re-write, so I can't promise how much more of this there will be :P

Still. Thank you for reading. It means a lot :)

[capemaynuts]

You've got my interest. I hope you share more soon.

[avoria]

Thank you!

When I have the time to faff with LJ's silly formatting stuff, the next part shall be up :)