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avonlea_dreamer

My new fic

Mar 05, 2008 19:07

Someone once said that you never have to rewrite what you got up in the middle of the night to write. This latest fic is my latest excursion into that getting-up-to-write thing and the reason I haven't gone to bed earlier than midnight for the past three nights (and why I'm so exhausted today ( Read more... )

thwc, au, just one night, smut, angst

Comments 14

sweet_iolanthe March 6 2008, 02:32:44 UTC

Lol. Of course Harry is not stupid. ;]
But, why did you have to stop here or even make Hermione think that Harry was stupid?!! argh. stupid ginny. always getting in the way, messing things up, somehow. le sigh. awesomeness. XD

avonlea_dreamer March 6 2008, 03:36:27 UTC

Well, I rather think Harry is a bit stupid in canon-- it IS stupid of him to like Ginny more than Hermione and not see HErmione for what she could be to him. (Admittedly, it's because JKR is stupid so of course she's going to write Harry stupid too.)

Eh, Ginny isn't the one messing things up in this fic.
And as for why I had to stop there-- well, I had to be mean in order to be nice later...

leonhart_17 March 6 2008, 05:03:54 UTC

as long as there's a happy ending...i'm such a sucker for those...

anndee123 March 6 2008, 05:18:15 UTC

Very nice. I liked the way you started en medias res. It is something rarely seen in fan fiction.

cuyler_morgan March 6 2008, 05:54:22 UTC

Hey!!! You just had to end it there didn't you *shakes head*. I really liked it. Update soon...please

jediyoda99 March 6 2008, 06:47:14 UTC

that was so beautifully written. Wow i can feel Hermione's pain of being wanted, of being in-love.I hope that you would continue writing this and am also waiting for the update in Truth about Love. :)