As promised-- I bring you the continuation of the smut-a-thon

Aug 21, 2007 18:07

The rest of the third fic in my 'All He Ever Wanted' series.

Worth Any Price, Part 1

And now for the smut and more fluff.

For avidbeader- gratuitous fluff and smut. ;-) (Because smut is never really necessary; it's just fun...)

Rated NC-17, of course.

Worth Any Price, Part 2 )

thwc, fluff, all he ever wanted, cavity-inducing fluff, smut

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sweet_iolanthe August 21 2007, 23:28:35 UTC
lovely, as usual.
nice smut. loving it here. XD

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marenkp August 22 2007, 04:53:38 UTC
"if he’d wanted someone who was helpless and weak, he could easily have found it in almost any other witch..." Amen to that. Too bad in canon, that's precisely what happened. Thank God for fanfiction.

"he could still make her blush. And it delighted him-for some reason he could never explain and didn’t try hard to explain either." That made me laugh. My husband likes it when I blush too--especially when he's the cause of said blushing.

Married!Harry and Hermione are sexier than ever. This was so deliciously hot. I'm loving it too.

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leonhart_17 August 22 2007, 12:10:52 UTC
awesome job as always - I second a lot of what marenkp said - thank God for fic! and marrried!hhr is hotter than ever! and you write the best of it!

so, thanks!

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avidbeader August 22 2007, 13:00:13 UTC
*adores*

You know, you can never write something that would be classified as pure PWP-style smut. Your gift of characterization, your ability to weave in thought-provoking ideas ("the thrill of knowledge"...that is so genius and so Hermione)...no one can take your stories, shove in two other names from some other fandom, and have it work. And I've seen plenty of smut!fics where one could do exactly that, where the point is the sex and the pr0n and not who's doing it. You never ever let your readers forget that you're writing Harry and Hermione first, and the situation second.

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avonlea_dreamer August 22 2007, 22:54:41 UTC
Thank you!!! I'm so glad you think so. Especially because the usual utter indifference to what's in-character and what's not in pure pwp fics; I detest those fics where it's all about the sex and the pr0n and you really could shove in any two other names and it would pretty much still work.

And as for writing Harry and Hermione first, but of course! :-D

*hugs* Thank you, again!

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ladybluestar August 22 2007, 15:58:03 UTC
I love it, just love it.

The bit about helplessness was very nice indeed. I loved her seduction of him as well.

Also, it was particularly touching that you started off with him tucking his daughter in.

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avonlea_dreamer August 22 2007, 22:56:26 UTC
I'm glad you liked that bit about helplessness. That part just came to me and I had to include it because it really did strike me as true. I can't see H/Hr being about kink like that, because of the other times in their lives they've been tied up and helpless.

And, well, it's always fun to write Hermione seducing Harry. :-D

Thank you; I'm so glad you liked this!

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