Absolutely LOVELY! You made it SO COHERENT & natural. I LOVED the fact that even if they both desired it so much they still decided to wait in consideration of Ron.
Props for this one, it was rather lovely! (How many times I said that word? LOL).
I can't add anything more praiseworthy or profound to anything written already about this.
But, I do love how this resolves so much of what I didn't like about book 6. I was thinking about that this morning as the java was infiltrating my system (because I'm worthless before the morning jolt.) But really, what was the damn point of HBP? Besides telling us Riddle's biography? She brings up Occlumency, and then drops it. She writes about V invading Harry's dreams, violently in 5, and then dismisses it with a half-formed reason. She brings Harry together with his "ideal" woman, and then does a piss-poor job of writing it. And then she destroys Hermione, the one fictional teenage girl whom I could count on to be rational and supportive. Instead, we get this shrill, competitive, mean-spirited turn. She turns on Harry! How could JKR make her do that??
Whoops. Sorry. Just had to get that out. But your fic makes everything much more ...sensible. And I'm right with the world again.
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It was absolutely perfect. So fluffy and I just can't get the words out but yeah!!
LOVE IT!
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Having been questioning why I ship these two in the first place recently, I've really needed a pick-me-up and a good reminder....
And boy did you give it to me!
Adding this to my memories for the next time I need a pick-me-up! And that was fantastic, wonderfully written, and just beautiful!
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Props for this one, it was rather lovely! (How many times I said that word? LOL).
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But, I do love how this resolves so much of what I didn't like about book 6. I was thinking about that this morning as the java was infiltrating my system (because I'm worthless before the morning jolt.) But really, what was the damn point of HBP? Besides telling us Riddle's biography? She brings up Occlumency, and then drops it. She writes about V invading Harry's dreams, violently in 5, and then dismisses it with a half-formed reason. She brings Harry together with his "ideal" woman, and then does a piss-poor job of writing it. And then she destroys Hermione, the one fictional teenage girl whom I could count on to be rational and supportive. Instead, we get this shrill, competitive, mean-spirited turn. She turns on Harry! How could JKR make her do that??
Whoops. Sorry. Just had to get that out. But your fic makes everything much more ...sensible. And I'm right with the world again.
Well done.
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