Wow...just wow. They way you continue to find connections and nuances to how the Trio are feeling about each other, about how Harry and Hermione are feeling about themselves and each other...when we get to the payoff it's going to be all the sweeter for the slow and careful buildup, like aging a wine into perfection. Greatly looking forward to the next part.
For a moment there I thought you were going to have Harry hop onto bed with her. 'Onto', not 'into'. Still being a gentleman, of course. But sitting opposite and thus being the first thing she sees - and vice versa - works too.
And I'm so pleased he's reciprocated her favours in this instalment, paying her back for how you started this. A couple of memories and now helping *her* sleep. Very satisfying. Makes me feel good about both of them and the stability of their relationship, they're both giving.
“Because I’m still too afraid!” she burst out. “Because even during the day, I need to be able to see you so I know you’re safe! Even though I know the War is over and there’s nothing to worry about, I can’t believe it unless I’m with you and can see you! I can’t!”I was starting to feel that this was overkill - either on your part, or otherwise you were writing Hermione as simply too obsessed over her 'saving Harry thing' to be healthy - when Harry mentioned he had
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I came here now and then to see if you had updated this story, and today, to my pleasure you had posted and I am glad. I loved it, it´s amazing how well you can write Harry and Hermione interaction. This chpt was especially wonderfull. Hope that you´ll update in the next few weeks. You´re one of the best writers from the glorius Portkey times that still are posting good story. Please, please, keep writing H/Hr fiction, ok? Senivatar
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For a moment there I thought you were going to have Harry hop onto bed with her. 'Onto', not 'into'. Still being a gentleman, of course. But sitting opposite and thus being the first thing she sees - and vice versa - works too.
And I'm so pleased he's reciprocated her favours in this instalment, paying her back for how you started this. A couple of memories and now helping *her* sleep. Very satisfying. Makes me feel good about both of them and the stability of their relationship, they're both giving.
“Because I’m still too afraid!” she burst out. “Because even during the day, I need to be able to see you so I know you’re safe! Even though I know the War is over and there’s nothing to worry about, I can’t believe it unless I’m with you and can see you! I can’t!”I was starting to feel that this was overkill - either on your part, or otherwise you were writing Hermione as simply too obsessed over her 'saving Harry thing' to be healthy - when Harry mentioned he had ( ... )
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