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avocado_love

Fic: Thicker Than Blood: Part 5

Jun 22, 2011 17:35

Title: Thicker Than Blood
Fandom: Inception/500 Days of Summer
Pairing: Arthur/Eames, Tom/Autumn
Rating: R
Word Count: 8,200
Summary: "My brother, Tom, has been missing for three days."
Notes: Written for this prompt on the Inception Kink meme. Edited, beta checked (thanks Starlingthefool!) and reposted.
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4
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( Arthur stood in a park. )

fandom: inception, fic: thicker than blood, pairing: eames/arthur

Comments 13

night_reveals June 23 2011, 02:15:01 UTC

\o/ reading from Narita airport! woot!

Oh Tom take the PASIV, we know you want it....

Anyway, everyone is alive, I am happy! :D

em

avocado_love June 24 2011, 02:10:06 UTC

Oh good! I'm glad you were able to read it. :D

Oh Tom take the PASIV, we know you want it....

LOL. I know, right? DO IT TOM. :D

Thanks for your comment!

kansouame June 23 2011, 02:39:17 UTC

OMG I was gripping the edge of my laptop through the shootout. So freaking exciting!! You write action sequences so well!!

Although... this line was classic:

"Wow," Tom said, stepping back to take a good look at him. "You look a little like that guy from Titanic."

avocado_love June 24 2011, 02:11:17 UTC

:D Thanks so much. I do love writing action scenes, so I'm glad that you liked it!

And LOL! I couldn't help myself. I also added the name Thomas Soloman (as in Tommy Soloman from 3rd Rock) in there. hehe.

Thanks for your comment!

gaerielcallista June 23 2011, 04:53:07 UTC

This fic is awesome :D The plot and the action really had me at the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the epilogue, though I feel the kind of melancholy that comes with the end of a great fic :\

Arthur had an odd moment, seeing Tom and Eames standing together. He realized that he and Eames made a handsome pair.

Yes, you do. You REALLY do :D

avocado_love June 24 2011, 02:12:58 UTC

Aw, thanks for your comment. :D It's been a fun ride. I was almost sorry to see it end as well. It might be fun to do a sequel one day, but I have no idea what it would be about. XD Thanks again!

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avocado_love June 24 2011, 02:14:28 UTC

Oh wow! That's quite the compliment. Thank you for saying so. I do love writing action scenes. :D

theablackthorn June 23 2011, 12:29:24 UTC

Wow what a chappie, all thrills and spills. Can't wait for the epilogue!

avocado_love June 24 2011, 02:14:41 UTC

Thanks so much!

theablackthorn June 24 2011, 07:39:31 UTC

Welcome sugar :)