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Another Brother: Chapter 25

Jan 29, 2011 14:34

Title: Another Brother
Rating: PG-13 (T)
Warning: AU
Summary: It was a mission of revenge. There weren't supposed to be any survivors, but Chief Hakoda couldn't bring himself to kill the Fire Nation boy. Against his better judgment, he brought him home. (A Zuko joins the Water Tribe story.)
Notes: *Sigh* This is one of those chapters where I ( Read more... )

fic: another brother, fandom: avatar: the last airbender

Comments 44

anarawells January 30 2011, 00:59:47 UTC

Thanks for updating. This is one of my fav fics.Can't wait to see what happens next especially in regards to the N. WT finding out about Z.

avocado_love January 31 2011, 02:53:13 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad to see you liked it so far. The next chapter should be... eventful. :D

...But character development = yaye! lynati_1 January 30 2011, 02:37:38 UTC

As usual, I like the subtle changes that come from Zuko being there (Azulon too, for that matter) - and that they are subtle, instead of derailing the whole storyline. I wonder how long the group is going to get away with their little underground teaching circle; after all, they weren't caught doing anything in public, and what they were witnessed doing could be passed off as Aang simply showing off what he learned if it was brought into question ( ... )

Re: ...But character development = yaye! avocado_love January 31 2011, 02:56:02 UTC

Oh hey, I'm glad you liked the character development! It's a lot of fun, slowly stacking up all of these little changes... they'll add to something big, I promise!

I've forgotten if you've talked about this before, but are you planning to "paraphrase" most of the canon, or is there going to be a wrench thrown in the works that causes the major conflicts of the show to end earlier (or later) than when season 3 ended?

Gah. A little of both? I can't answer really without giving too much away. Sorries!

kuiskata January 30 2011, 03:12:18 UTC

An update! Yay!

I can't wait to see the fallout when the NWT finds out about Zuko.

Iroh allowed himself a smile before reaching to unroll the charts of the North Pole- older ones, this time. Not the newer, more current ones he had purchased.
Plotting!Iroh made me squee.

Looking very much forward to the next chapter!

avocado_love January 31 2011, 02:56:34 UTC

I can't wait to see the fallout when the NWT finds out about Zuko.

Whahaha. You and me both. :D Thank you for the comment and I'll try not to keep you waiting!

donahermurphy January 30 2011, 03:34:31 UTC

Oh, wow.

...it would be so awesome to see AZULA blamed for part of the North Pole mess, as well as Iroh. exploring how she would deal with not having a position in Fire Nation society, how Usra might deal with both her children out of the country.. awesome.

I was very excited to see the update; can't wait to read how Iroh would deal with an attack on the moon spirit, as well as possible drama over Zuko's identity.

Looking forward to the next update very much.

avocado_love January 31 2011, 03:02:34 UTC

Thank you very much! There are going to be some big changes and I'm probably as excited to write it as you are to read it. :D Anyway, thanks again!

hiroki92 January 30 2011, 19:13:36 UTC

YAAAAAAAAAY!!! Awesome chapter, so much so that I can hardly wait to see what you do for the next one!

avocado_love January 31 2011, 03:02:49 UTC

Thank you very much! I'll try not to keep you waiting. :D