OP Fic: Once more with feeling - Epilogue + Omake

Apr 08, 2009 14:12

Title: Once more with feeling - Epilogue + Omake
Author: aviss
Pairing: Zoro/+Sanji
Rating: R
Genre: Drama, Angst, Horror.
Warning: Violence, character deaths (only not)
Disclaimer: So disclaimed.
Summary: Sanji is given a second chance to set things right. And a third. And a fourth…
Word Count: ~3.000 this part - 25.500 total

He closed his eyes again, tired. This wasn't supposed to be happening, he couldn't be there. )

zoro/sanji, once more with feeling, fic, one piece

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babyluw April 8 2009, 14:16:16 UTC
ah, he survived! I'm so glad
and zoro... <3 heh...

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aviss April 9 2009, 07:07:51 UTC
Thank you!

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aviss April 9 2009, 07:09:08 UTC
Oh thanks, it was quite the difficult scene to write, considering I didn't want overflowing emotions but I needed to convey the feeling they have... I'm glad it worked.

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andyprue April 8 2009, 15:25:59 UTC
YESSS!!! YOU UPDATED!!! And my thoughts aren't even coherent to truly express how great this whole fic is! You made me undergo BUNCHES of emotions and I actually feel as if I was reading the actual One Piece by Oda, only in words! The feelings are so real I can actually feel them, especially with Day 6 and 7...and the Epilogue had tears welling in my eyes! I can't even describe how impossibly awesome this is, and that didn't even include the small ZoSan part! (I for once won't mind if it didn't happen...but it doesn't matter now)
Let's summarize my utter love for this fic with a big, big heart. ♥ (even if I'd never commented before - bad on my part)

P.S: And I love the Omake too, especially the way you conveyed that the bad guy isn't really bad...and turns out the good guy isn't exactly an angel either (which makes sense considering she's Death after all).

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aviss April 9 2009, 07:17:44 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm blushing here :)

I was wondering about the omake, I wanted to include it because it suddenly gave Death a different character, not such a nice girl after all. I'm glad to know I didn't fail with that

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sanji_x_zoro April 8 2009, 16:55:59 UTC
YESSSSS!!! Awwwwwsome story with a wonderful ending!! <3<3<3 Gosh, I so wanna hug you right now! Aww at Sanji's sacrifice.
His happy mood when he was going through the day to get to his death was so heart clenching (I love this word!!) it almost made me cry T_T
Zoro's a hot kickass reliable nakama no wonder he saved Sanji at the end. You can count on him ALL THE TIME!! <3 <3
LOL at Zoro's comment at the end. (Though I didn't exactly get it so did he actually remembered what happened or did Death tell him?) But oh, what are you waiting for Sanji?? Just jump on this hottie before he gets away. And Zoro you dumbass you can't get a better soulmate than this cook in all eternity! Ah I worship these two ~_~

Thanks for the lovely lovely story! This goes straight to my memories and will be read again and again and again <3

Write moooorrrreeee! XD

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aviss April 9 2009, 07:20:38 UTC
Thank you! Sanji's mood was more like forced cheer, there is nothing he can do if he wants to save his friends, so he takes it like a good thing after all.

The kiss: the thing with the deja vu, it's more like a half-remembered dream but he puts two and two together and figures out the rest.

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halcyonsummer April 8 2009, 20:48:38 UTC
T_T aaaah he lives!! *sobs tears of joy*

That was an emotional roller coaster. Sanji's calm acceptance to his death was heart wrenching. And then Zoro coming to save him(...agian).

xD The omake was great. It kinda reminded me of Dead like me with the souls quotient.

;_; thank you so much for writing this it was absolutely wonderful <3<3<3.

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aviss April 9 2009, 07:21:50 UTC
Thank you! Zoro will always be there to save the day! He's reliable like that!

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