PW fic: Dream a little dream

[aviss]

Title: Dream a little dream

Comments

[mereprototype]

The way you kept repeating phrases both in the dream and out made this flow very well. I felt every bit of Edgeworth's frustration until the dream stopped being just a dream. And the emotions felt real to me, which is always important and damn hot. Good work!

[aviss]

Thanks, I was feeling frustrated as well, I thought Miles would die from a case of blue balls by the end.

[studiokawaii]

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Wow.

Now we´ll go for a cigarette.

Ojú qué caló, shiquilla... H_____H

[kamapon]

Y tanto que calorXDDd

Y lo del cigarrito....es que joder, parece que el polvo lo ha echao una y no los maromos estos, carajo....XD

(ma molao to en inglés y luego el ojú qué caló..XD)

[aviss]

heh, me alegro que guste... mas calores en breve XD

[aviss]

Thanks!

[pinku_supaiida]

OMG your icon kills me with insanity and hawtness!! >D

[alienchrist]

I really enjoyed this! I like the brevity and simplicity of your prose, it made it very easy to read. I also liked that there were a few moments I wasn't sure if they would get together, and then they did. Nice job!

[aviss]

Thank you! they were trying to resist me at some points, but in the end they are good together :)

[arora_kayd]

:D

[aviss]

Thanks !