Fanfiction: Master's Hobby (Fran, Mukuro)

Mar 13, 2010 17:18

Here's a fanfic I made for my creative writing class under Ma'am Sanchez. It's supposedly wholesome (especially for non-readers of Reborn), but I couldn't resist.

I hope it doesn't suck too much. It's been years since I last wrote a fic.

Title: Master's Hobby
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating: PG-13?
Characters: Fran, Mukuro, XANXUS, Tsuna, ( Read more... )

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sleeping_sei March 13 2010, 12:47:08 UTC
I like it~ And Fran is funny thinking about Mukuro and his relationship with guys :)

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avishi March 13 2010, 12:54:15 UTC
I'm glad you liked it~
I was actually supposed to include Hibari (since Mukuro likes to stalk him too), but it was kinda irrelevant to the whole mafia boss category that Mukuro was so fond of.

Thanks for the comment! X3

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azurecerulean March 13 2010, 14:47:17 UTC
I wonder why you typed Xanxus's name in all capital letters, while you didn't do so for the others.

The pairing possibilities above are lovely; they feel soooo canon.

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avishi March 14 2010, 00:25:04 UTC
I typed XANXUS' name in all caps because that's how his name is always written in Japanese. I think I got used to it?
(Besides, his personality makes his name suitable for it. XD)

I tried to make my fic as close to canon as possible so what I wrote is something I based off from the events in the manga. Mukuro's interest in Byakuran and XANXUS, for example, was spoken by his actions towards them, so I didn't exactly made them up. Though I exaggerated a bit. >:D

Thanks for commenting~

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hiyuura March 13 2010, 18:07:42 UTC
Ahahaha. Fran is such a Mukuro yaoi fanboy. XP

Anyway, I love all the hints given here. Thanks for brightening my night. It's really lovely. <3

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avishi March 14 2010, 00:37:39 UTC
I think Fran's a bit jealous. XD

The fic wasn't made for the fandom, so I really restrained myself, but I'm very happy that you were still able to appreciate it.
Thank you! ♥

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selenas_magick March 14 2010, 04:44:33 UTC
Oh, this was quite nice. :D I love your Fran here, he's so funny trying to figure out his Master.

I like all the pairing possibilities. I've always been intrigued by the relationship Mukuro and Xanxus seem to have.

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avishi March 14 2010, 04:54:49 UTC
Thank you so much for the comment~
I'm glad you liked my characterization of Fran, I was afraid he became OOC.

Yeah, Amano-sensei always makes those two big, horizontal panels whenever they talk to each other. It's suspicious.

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selenas_magick March 14 2010, 06:35:16 UTC
I didn't think he was OOC at all. You did a great job of capturing his voice, I think.

It's quite suspicious, isn't it? There's always just a hint as to what their relationship might be, and then nothing else. So we're left to fill in the blanks for ourselves...

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itakoaya March 15 2010, 11:24:38 UTC
"Fran was more concerned about his Master being done in by him."
my favourite line ROFLLLL

This read like it should be continued *wink* ;D

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avishi March 15 2010, 12:37:41 UTC
Ohh, I love that line too~ ♥

It's really made to be a 1 page story because that's the limit my professor gave us, but if I'm going to continue writing about this, maybe I'll write it differently?

I don't really know how to continue it this way, LOL.

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itakoaya March 15 2010, 12:56:07 UTC
WAIT you included such seedy p0rness (?) in a story to be handed to your professor? ROFL

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avishi March 15 2010, 13:02:31 UTC
LOL, it's not even half my usual porny writing style, but yeah. I handed it out to my professor and my classmates~ They had to critique it and whatnot. It was meant for non-readers of Reborn, actually. My professor was happy though, and my classmates were kinda denying the fact that it had faggotry all over it.

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