Fanfiction: Fighting! (Part 3/6: Of Different Worlds)

[avery_averette]

Characters: Takki, Pi, Jin, Ryo, Kame, Tsubasa and Matchy
Pairing: TakkiPi, TakiTsuba, Akame (more to follow)
Genre: AU, angst, comedy, fluff, romance, smut
Rating: PG13
Summary: Kame goes all out for his dream, but is it an impossible dream?
Disclaimer: It seems impossible that the boys will ever be mine.
Note: Daily updated 6-part story. For Dorayaki-

Comments

[kumiko_yamapi]

ç_ç ç_ç ç_ç ç_ç ç_ç This chapter is so heartbreaking!! And yet so beautiful!! I love the way you write!
Poor Tsubasa, going through such hard times at such a young age... And poor Kame, "hopelessly in love"... :'(

'I came here for a dream. Who knows if it'll turn into a nightmare?'
'Because nobody looks at a real nobody?'
It's a statement that silences all others. And the silence that follows is so quiet that Kame could hear a pin drop and his heart break.
I just had to quote these sentences because I loved them!! :D

[avery_averette]

Thank you for being so precise! It helps to know what touches readers.
Part 4 is out. Enjoy!