Fanfiction: Love is a Four Letter Word (one-shot)

[avery_averette]

Characters: Takizawa Hideaki, Yamashita Tomohisa and OC

Pairing: TakkiPi

Genre: Angst, AU, light fluff

Rating: G

Summary: Takki finally finds love knocking on his door, but what if the person at the door is not the one whose love letters he fell for?

Disclaimer: OC and the plot are mine. The rest are mine too Johnny’s.

Comments

[kumiko_yamapi]

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!! ^-^ The last lines were the most beautiful!! Though I hope Kimiko will find a nice boy who loves only her and Takki and Pi can be together... =D
There's just one thing I can't understand... How is it possible that love doesn't love such an handsome man as Takki?! xP

[avery_averette]

I've failed? Because the ending was meant to be sad. Pi was indeed confessing to Takki but since he wouldn't allow himself to do it openly, he could only hide it under the pretense that it was meant for his sister. Takki was meant to never know of Pi's feelings for him or even fully realise his own for Pi.
But thank you for your comments. I've made some changes to the last few paras to better convey that intended meaning.
As for loveless, good-looking Takki, I hope it's only possible in fiction because I hope he has a loving companion in real life that makes him very happy, whether it's Tsubasa or Pi, or both.

[kumiko_yamapi]

Of course you haven't failed!!!! I was just hoping that everything would be ok... The ending was perfectly fine... I love sad endings, remember? That's why I liked the last part the most. =D
Sorry my comment wasn't clear!! :(

[avery_averette]

Thank you for clearing the air. At first I was like, 'Sweet? What about sad?'
And yes, I remember you like sad ending. That's why I'm working on them too.
Once again, thank you for your generous and repeated support throughout the year! Readers and commentors are such encouragement and motivation. I'm hoping to do better next year. In the meantime, I hope you're getting your Pi fix reading about reports of his solo con.
Have a fruitful rest-of-2009! Enjoy!

[miracleshining]

I always get SO excited when I get to read a new TakkaPi piece by you! This was sweet, beautiful and touching. (I hope Kimichan finds a lovely young man too!)

The ending was great, thank you for sharing!

[avery_averette]

I'm sorry to rock your boat because the ending was meant to be sad. Looks like I've bombed big time this time. Pi was indeed confessing to Takki but since he wouldn't allow himself to do it openly, he could only hide it under the pretense that it was meant for his sister. Takki was meant to never know of Pi's feelings for him or even fully realise his own for Pi.
But thank you for your comments. I've made some changes to the last few paras to better convey that intended meaning.
My next piece of TakkiPi, Love Me Again, will be early Jan next year. It'll involve Tsubasa, Kame and Jin and maybe others. As for who gets who, you'll have to read to know. And since I intend it to be 9 chaps long, I'm looking forward to your continued support. Yoroshiku!.
Have a billiant rest of the year! Till we meet again, take care and enjoy!

[yamapiislove]

T__________T
that was so sad!
unspoken feelings are the worst.
i want them all to be happy~
but not anybody can be happy
*sigh*
love truly does hurt.

[avery_averette]

Thank you for sharing my sentiments.
You're right, unspoken feelings are the worst. But I guess we've all been there. Don't we all have silent crushes before?
I'll be reading your other fics soon. Thank you for writing too.