Fanfiction: So Cute It Hurts (one-shot)

[avery_averette]

Characters: Yamashita Tomohisa, Kamenashi Kazuya, Takizawa Hideaki and Akanishi Jin

Pairings: TakkiPi, TakiKame  and Akame
Genre: Angst, AU, fluff, light smut
Summary: Teacher, father and lover?
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: I know you know.

So Cute It Hurts

The sleeping figure before him looked too beautiful to be real. Porcelain smooth skin, sharp nose

Comments

[kumiko_yamapi]

Delinquent-Casanova Pi, teacher Takki, football-player Jin and Kame as Pi's best-friend?! Really, do you want to make me die? Because if so you made it!! In a good way obviously!! ^-^
I simple love this fic!!!! It's sweet and funny at the same time! I loved Pi's question when Kame suggested him to join a club! And also Kame and Jin's confession! I can imagine them saying things like those... =D And Takki and Pi's relationship was simply perfect. I think it's like that even in real life...
It's a wonderful fic!! ^^

[avery_averette]

I'm glad a Pi fan approves!
You're right that everything seems rather familiar. So I hope to make them a little darker the next time. But I'm a fluffy writer. Ah... contradictions.
If you have any TakkiPi story ideas, please do share them with me.
Thanks again for your presence. It's so comfortiung it hurts.

[kumiko_yamapi]

Really, can I request a fic? Thank you!!! You're wonderful!! ^-^
I like your idea of making them darker... I love TakkiPi fics where their relationship is difficult because the're senpai and kouhai and there would be problems if anyone found out about them so they have to hide their feelings and where it's clear how Pi is Takki's favourite kouhai and Takki's is so important to Pi (like a father or an older brother). Maybe this kind of fics are some of the very few fics where I don't really like sad endings... Because Pi and Takki just have to be together! (well, at least when Tsubasa and Toma aren't around! =D)
Ops, I've written a bit too much! ^^

[fluffyblanket]

What a fine writer you are ! I didn't know what "Fanfic" was ...

[avery_averette]

We learn something everyday, don't we. Fanfics means fan fiction. And since I'm a fan of a few of JE's (Johnny's Entertainment) artistes, I've been using them as characters in my writing.
It's rather silly considering what you must be used to. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[fluffyblanket]

Thanks for the explanation ! It's not silly at all . You're very creative !

[dorayaki_chan]

gyaaaaaaaaaa this story is so cute(cute kamepi, cute akame, cute takipi, every thing is so damn cute) , so cute it hurts just like the title ha ha ha but why on earth i feel like taki is cheating on his beloved tsubasa duuuuuuh silly me ha ha ha ha

[avery_averette]

Tsubasa will not be forgotten! Another TakiTsuba by next Fri. And of course, thank you for always being so supportive it hurts.

[shiyu_hanaoka]

As always. Your fanfic is awesome. I always love teacher Takki cos I think he always have great relationship with his kohai. I love the ending too. Btw, there's a minor minor thing that I want to point out. When you write 'tuition' i guess you mean 'tutoring or tutorial' right? Hope you don't mind that I point this out. Thanks again for the fic.

[avery_averette]

Many thanks for your continued support!
No worries at all. Where I am, we use the term tuition. It means the same as tutoring and tutorial. And please by all means point out anything which is grammatically incorrect or even illogical because sometimes I fail to see my mistakes, even after many rounds of editting.
Thanks again! Cheers!

[miracleshining]

Absolutely loved this. It flowed beautifully and you captured the awkward romance and sweet nature that I often relate to the TakkaPi pairing. (When I'm not making them so dark and frightening!)

Thank you for writing this, I will definitely add it to my faves and I look forward to reading more TakkaPi from you in the future!

(And of course, I must use my "So Cute It Hurts" icon!)

[avery_averette]

Many thaks for liking you because you made it possible!
I have another TakkiPi in mind but am still working on it.
Happy writing to you too.