T&T Fanfiction: The Dancing Tree (one-shot)

[avery_averette]

Characters: Tackey and Tsubasa
Genre:  AU, angst, fluff, friendship and romance?
Rating: PG
Summary: Takki wants to forget. But occasionally he would remember the tree from his distant past, and the friend waiting under it.
Note: A picture says a thousand words. In this case, the pic below inspired this fic.

Comments

[fancyann1974]

so sweet and touching
thank you so much for sharing

[avery_averette]

Thank you for reading and commenting!
I was hoping that readers get the idea that Tsubasa is a tree spirit. Do you think it was a difficult guess? I'm afraid I'm not making myself clear these days.

[fancyann1974]

I think they should be able to understand that, not difficult at all :)

[avery_averette]

Thank you! You've been very reassuring!!

[hikary22]

Oh my my my I heart this story! :D

'One more thing,' Tsubasa said, before he gently planted his lips onto Tackey's. 'Feel better?' he asked, with a sad smile. <--- This line literally made me go Awwwwwwww~~~ *melt*

Seriously dear, I really adore your way of writing. It managed to capture a lot of meanings beneath very little words... Wonder how'd you do that??

This makes me miss T&T after a long time! <3 Keep writing more! :D

[avery_averette]

Thank you for pointing out what worked for you! But huh? You sure you've got the right writer? I'm a joke at best. But thank you for being so kind. I'm afraid I don't have any trick, tip or formula. It is what it is.
So for future development, the current story ideas that have been running through my mind have all been rather lewd and since my writing skills can't match up, they've all been eliminated.

[hikary22]

Ya'a~~~ I'm sure I got the right writer! <3 I meant what I said. Well, if I don't feel that way I would rather not say it in the first place~ ^^

Awwww really? No formula?? huhu~ TT___TT Then it must be ur natural talent... okay I envy such people! >.

[snow_meow]

Took me a while to get it that Tsubasa was the tree spirit.

I like the fic

[avery_averette]

Thank you for liking it!
Since the last fic, I became kiasu and kiasi and added a spoiler (just in case). If you can think of anything I could watch in my writing to help get my point across, do let me know.
Thanks again for reading and commenting!

[granity20]

averette, i really love this fic!!!!
is there a sequel to this????
takki didn't plan on really forgetting tsubasa didn't he???
wow,. i really do like this so much!!!!

[gabriel_oneil]

Such a gentle romantic story ^___^ Also it's written very well :) I like it very much ^__^ And I want to read more ^__^

[avery_averette]

Thank you very much for the encouragement. It's nice to know that a simple story can reach out to others too.
There are more at http://avery-averette.livejournal.com/66315.html. But my stories are mainly silly fangirling. So you've been warned.

[gabriel_oneil]

Don't worry strongly about that your stories "mainly silly fangirling" - sometimes it is very desirable to read something romantic. And it is always interesting to read it, if the person writes sincerely and not bad :)
If to be honest I don't know those people about whom you write fanfiction. So for me it is simply a story. :)

[avery_averette]

Ah, you must be a very gentle person. Your words have a very comforting tone about them.
Thank you. I'm glad non-fangirls can appreciate the stories too.