Comments | avery_averette: T&T Fanfiction: Broken Wings (Part 5/5: Lonely Skies)

avery_averette

T&T Fanfiction: Broken Wings (Part 5/5: Lonely Skies)

May 27, 2011 10:42

Characters (full series): Tackey, Tsubasa, Nagase and Kitagawa
Genre (full series): AU, angst, fluff, friendship and light smut
Rating: PG13
Summary: When two broken souls are joined together by lies and deceit, can there be salvation within? Note: For Imai Julia.

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stories, fanfiction (mainly t&t)

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hi anonymous May 27 2011, 04:17:28 UTC

oh no. ....that's mean tsubasa is dead?so sad. ...:'(,

Re: hi avery_averette May 27 2011, 04:24:03 UTC

Thanks for reading! But nope, he's not dead. Sometimes you have to be harsh to be kind. In order to put him out of danger, Takki 'raped' him to force him away from his side.

dorayaki_chan May 27 2011, 04:54:03 UTC

I hope it works this time pheeew cause lately the connection is decided to play dumb , crazy what so ever it just won,t post the comment or even worse the connection is not working at all sometime X'( is it really the end "END" of the story?? Cause it seems like it was just half hanging there takki leaving tsubasa just like that ?? Takki can,t hate tsubasa that much right and what,s gonna happen to takki next ?? Oow it seems like I just can,t get enough when you are mentally torture the boys like this mwa ha ha ha (#brick me #)

avery_averette May 27 2011, 05:05:09 UTC

Oops, sorry it looks like I didn't quite the story across. Takki loves Tsubasa. That's why he didn't want his Tsubaby to be in danger again. He 'raped' him to force him away. He even lied that his father raped and killed Tsu's father. But, in fact, their fathers were in love too.

hikary22 May 28 2011, 08:28:22 UTC

*sorry to bug in* lol xD

Owwww really that's what happen??? I was first disappointed by the ending but now that u've cleared it out... it is sweet in some kind of way - Takki's sacrifices I mean.. huhu TT____TT I can sooo cry!! But it's just too heartbreaking that they can't be together, eventhough I know it is necessary for Tsubasa not to get too involved with Takki for his own safety...

Good job on the fic! ♥ Keep spreading more TakkiTsuba love! :3

hikary22 May 28 2011, 08:31:01 UTC

Oh dear.. I'm ready to beg u for a sequel! xD

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snow_meow May 27 2011, 04:59:02 UTC

It's so sad.

Both of them needs each other yet, Takki to protect Tsubasa and their fathers love, did what he did.

avery_averette May 27 2011, 05:15:02 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm afrad that the story might have been a little confusing with all that junping around. But I'm so glad that you got it!

granity20 May 27 2011, 12:40:13 UTC

i would have want them to end up together.
a life of a gangster-when your heart really is not one-is too sad and living it alone is near to unbearable!!!!

avery_averette May 28 2011, 03:49:58 UTC

Maybe Tsubasa will forgive Takki and turn up at the airport after all. Or maybe not....

granity20 May 28 2011, 09:28:08 UTC

or maybe you could right a sequel to this averette....^___^

avery_averette June 1 2011, 00:41:13 UTC

Or maybe you could.
Not likely for me. I seem to have bombed this one. The plot was misunderstood by some readers. Wonder what went wrong. Was there any part of the story that seemed out of place or confusing or unnecessary? If so, please share.

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fancyann1974 May 29 2011, 21:47:46 UTC

so beautiful and touching, takki loves tsubasa so much he forcing him away from him
thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story

avery_averette May 31 2011, 11:22:04 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Was there any part of the story that seemed out of place or confusing? If so, please share.
The plot was misunderstood by some readers. Wonder what went wrong.

fancyann1974 June 1 2011, 02:42:26 UTC

no i thought it was great the way it was
thank you again for sharing <3