fic (donnie darko): two octobers

Apr 05, 2012 00:17

Title: Two Octobers
Author: averita
Summary: She dreams, strange, scattered dreams that taste like salt when she swallows them away.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~1000
A/N: I'm pinch-hitting for the mary_mcdonnell Minor Character Month of Love, which gave me a chance to explore Rose Darko! She's one of my favorite characters so this was a fun opportunity. The first ( Read more... )

writing: fanfiction, fic: mm

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marzipanilla April 5 2012, 06:04:52 UTC
I just watched Donnie Darko last week (for the whatever-th time), so that whole world is still swirling around in my brain and this just fits in so well.

I've never found much fanfic for it that handles dreams quite well, though it is a big theme for it. This is just gorgeous with just the right touch of both realities.

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averita April 5 2012, 16:29:33 UTC
It's been ages since I watched it, and I still don't entirely understand it (though I suppose that's part of the fun), so I'm glad you think that this fits in well!

Dreams are tricky, but I liked the idea of exploring the parallel worlds and they seemed a natural (if admittedly easy) way of connecting the two. I'm really happy you think it worked.

Thanks so much for commenting!

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nvgvup April 5 2012, 07:10:37 UTC
I really love this. I think you really bring Rose to life in these short drabbles. I can feel her being tugged back & forth between the world of her son, his dreams, his psychosis, and the world of her family, and the world of everything else... Very nicely done.

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firstlady1408 April 5 2012, 12:38:08 UTC
Just had to say I LOVE your icon. The childlike empress was prob my first crush many, many, many years ago.

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nvgvup April 5 2012, 16:42:15 UTC
Thanks! All credit goes to fixed_points. I saw it and HAD to have it! I grew up rewinding an old beta tape to figure out her name!!

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averita April 5 2012, 16:31:20 UTC
Thank you so much! It's a confusing movie to watch and she's a hard character to get a read on, but I felt like she was the one who was trying so hard to hold herself and everyone else together while being pulled in ten different directions, so tried to get that tension across. I hope it worked!

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radak April 5 2012, 07:11:02 UTC
it's amazing!

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averita April 5 2012, 16:31:35 UTC
Thank you!

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surena_13 April 5 2012, 08:22:54 UTC
These were beautiful. You've managed to perfectly bring the atmosphere of the movie in these. You've really brought more depth to Rose and I love that she sort of remembers that alternate timeline in her dreams. And that you managed to work some of the lyrics of Mad World in them.

Fantastic job!

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averita April 5 2012, 16:32:40 UTC
Thanks so much. Like I said above, it's been ages since I've seen the movie, and it's confusing at the best of times, so I'm especially glad it rang true.

As for the Mad World lyrics - lol. I wasn't sure if that counted as cheating, but I liked the idea. I'm glad you did too :)

Thanks again!

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sczep84 April 5 2012, 10:23:39 UTC
Absolutely amazing!! U totally managed to capture the mood of the film and u wrote Rose very much in chacter! Love these!! Now I wanna rewatch Donnie Darko!

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averita April 5 2012, 16:33:26 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! Rose was a great character to explore. I hadn't seen the movie in quite awhile so it was a good excuse to get it out again :)

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