fic (bsg): out of gas and riding on air

[averita]

Title: Out of Gas and Riding on Air

Author: averita

Summary: For weeks, she’s been desperate to get this trial over with, to send Gaius Baltar through an airlock and move on with the rest of the fleet. She still is, but now there’s a new battle to fight, and part of her is ready to lay down her arms.

AN: Written for duathkaimler for the adama_roslin Secret Santa exchange.

Comments

[mascaret]

I found this to be incredibly genuine. All the little scenes and moments fit well with each other and the series. Well done.

[averita]

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback :)

[averita]

Thank you so much! Personally I don't think that anything like this happened in canon - I'm one of those who think that they kissed a couple of times on New Caprica and that was about it until The Hub - but I'm glad that it rings true!

[inperfectpeace]

That was great, Avery! You wrote the characters very well, and I could see this. Lovely job. :)

[averita]

Thank you so much!

[averita]

Thanks so much for the feedback :)

[anna741]

This was stunningly spot on! It kind of makes me feel a little pummeled, actually. This truly makes his actions seem like a betrayal. Thank you for sharing.

[averita]

Thank you so much! I thought about stretching it out and exploring what happened after the trial, but I felt like their issues were dealt with in Six of One and The Ties That Bind, and I've already written post-fight fic. I liked ending on a happier note (at least in terms of their relationship). We all know that they made up, in any case! LOL!