Fic for muccamukk: Normal Routines | Betty Ross/Bruce Banner | NC-17

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Title: Normal Routines
Author: mihnn
Recipient: muccamukk
Rating: NC-17
Universe: Elements of comics
Pairing/Characters: Betty Ross/Bruce Banner
Word Count: 2393
Disclaimer: I do not own the Marvel Universe.
Summary: She lives the life that she was meant to live… according to her father.
Notes: Thank you to J for betaing this at the last minute.

Comments

[muccamukk]

Awwwww. I love the ending. They have such an occasionally relationship, but they're so intense when they connect. Betty planing roses is great, and poor women with Bruce tripping all over them as he does his Edward big :)

The descriptions are really beautiful, especially over the roses and the meeting in the rain. Why must they always meet in the rain, those two?

Also, the porn was hot.

Great story, thanks for write it for me!

[lilacsigil]

I love the metaphor of the roses through this fic, and how Betty can't feel entirely dead when she has made something for her own, against her domineering father's wishes. The end gives me hope.