Fic for snack-size: Mockery of Freedom | Clint/Bruce | NC-17

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Title: Mockery of Freedom
Author: heeroluva
Recipient: snack-size
Rating: NC-17
Universe: Movie with some comic details
Pairing/Characters: Clint/Bruce, Natasha, Tony
Word Count: 4617
Disclaimer: They're not mine. I make no money from them.
Summary: Bruce had enough demons of his own to deal with without adding other peoples’ to the mix. That apparently doesn't stop

Comments

[muccamukk]

I really enjoyed this story. I liked Bruce's PoV and how twisted up on himself he is, and his connections with Clint. Natasha and Tony's scenes were great too. I loved Tony's amended heart monitor plan.

[heeroluva]

Thanks! It's totally something Tony would do.

[cariad_winter]

Love Bruce in this and while you know I usually go for much darker stuff, I love this. I might also like the idea of Bruce and Clint just a little and that's saying something :D Excellent job!

[heeroluva]

Glad you gave it a chance. :D Thank you!

[snack_size]

this is just really wonderful, and exactly what I was hoping for and more than I expected. The interaction with Bruce and Natasha was really well written and poignant, especially since you could still sense Natasha's fear even as she is growing more used to Bruce. And Bruce and Clint really worked for me, especially the image you made at the end of Clint being excited, eager, almost cute with Bruce despite everything.

and, of course, you wrote Bruce and his POV so well. Thank you so much! I adored this.

[heeroluva]

I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I hadn't written Bruce before, so was kind of worried about my portrayal of him. My original ending wasn't a happy one, but I felt that Clint's characterization was lacking a bit, so I changed it. You're very welcome!