Title: Imperfect, chapter two of three
Characters/Pairings: Mai/Zuko
Summary: It's been years since they last met, and many things have changed...some more so than others, and none in the way she expected.
Rating: T
Notes: Chapter one is
here. This begins immediately after the events in "Crossroads of Destiny." Written for
rawles, in an attempt to help
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Maiko is fun and you wrote really well, like
I envy your use of words...seriously.
I can't wait for the next chpater =D
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Your characterizations of Mai and Zuko are, like, ridiculously amazing as well. The way Mai is so completely in love and yet can be totally detatched from it, and the way Zuko sulks around the palace and angsts over everything like he always does and reads "Earth Kingdom propaganda" until I want to fall in love with them BOTH.
So basically, next chapter plz thx.
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I'm glad you liked how I wrote Mai and Zuko, and approved of the Earth Kingdom Propaganda....here's to hoping the last chapter didn't disappoint! ^_^;;
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