Weekly Visit

[avocado_love]

Prompt: #13 In The Asylum by eilonnwy 
Title: Weekly Visit
Author: okami_no_yume 
Rating: T
Word Count:
Characters: Zuko/Azula
Prompt used: #13 In The Asylum
Warnings/Pairings: Canon pairings, mentioned in passing.
Summary: Zuko visits Azula in the asylum. Five years post series.
Obligatory Disclaimer: The characters belong to their respective owners. I hold no claim over

Comments

[jin_fenghuang]

XD I first misread that as Zuko/Azula as in it being shippy.

I like their interaction and the way they turned out. Poor kids, their Dad really did a number on them.

And omg Zuko is going to be the most paranoid father ever *snort*

[okami_no_yume]

Hahahaha, thanks. Oh God, I was so nervous submitting.

This idea....well, I wasn't sure if I wanted to go with crazy! Azula or put her on the altar of redemption Azula. I chose the former because I wasn't sure how to make redeeming Azula work.

And yes. Yes, he will be.

Thanks for the comment! ^.^

[plushiesexual]

You hit Azula's personality on the head. Her cutting sarcasm is alive as ever, I could clearly see her in this scene laying it out into Zuko. Also the insights on how Ozai's breeding of her made her the tragic twisted character she is today made my heart break. Fantastic job. Its so interesting to see this scene, I could see this being exactly as how it might play out between them.

[okami_no_yume]

Awwwww, thank you! I've never really written Azula before and I wanted to give her a try. I did my best to capture her character.

When I saw this had been posted I was like.

I was so nervous submitting, glad you thought it was good!

[math_camel]

I think you did a very good job writing Azula. I like that her 'good' day behavior is just like her in the past which makes me worry for her bad days.

When I saw this I thought it would be a shipping fic, and I kind of can't handle asylum incest but I'm really glad I read the warnings and was corrected.