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PROMPT #3: "Each Wave Her Mirror" daythirtynine K

May 18, 2010 01:57

Title: Each Wave Her Mirror
Author: daythirtynine
Rating: K
Words: 474
Genre: Gen ? (I'm bad at genres, guys.)
Char/Pair: Yue, Yue/Sokka, Yue/La
Warning: Spoilers through Seige of the North Pole.
Summary: Yue sees all but watches only one.

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prompt 03: undying, rating: k, author: daythirtynine

Comments 12

yukinoomoni May 18 2010, 14:08:15 UTC

Guh.

Beautiful.

daythirtynine May 18 2010, 14:18:29 UTC

This comment says a lot to me. Thank you so much.

yukinoomoni May 18 2010, 14:22:17 UTC

Lol, sorry, I tend to lose coherence when something socks me eight in the solar-plexus. Allow me to elaborate.

The language you use is beautiful, although it's simple enough to relish in. Yue's quiet observance of everything around her, her chosen silence with her new and perhaps unwanted partner in life is just evocative and beautiful. And the fact that La seems to understand a little, an inkling, despite not being human, is interesting.

And the ending was lovely. Her choosing to speak, now that the centre of her observance is dead, is breathtaking.

daythirtynine May 18 2010, 14:24:09 UTC

Haha. I didn't mean it to be sarcastic but that I left you kind of speechless was compliment enough. But again thank you thank you. Your comment means so m much to me.

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rowzen May 18 2010, 15:25:50 UTC

If this isn't perfect, it's damn close!

TY!

daythirtynine May 18 2010, 16:37:20 UTC

And you even used a cute Sokka heart icon. No, thank you!

aerodactylus May 18 2010, 16:08:14 UTC

That was good.

That was DAMN GOOD.

asdfghjkl;awesome

daythirtynine May 18 2010, 16:38:27 UTC

Thanks so much. I really appreciate it - especially the random lettering ;) !

dr_abraxas May 24 2010, 06:56:51 UTC

I read it earlier and I thought I commented! I'm a sucker for Sokka/Yue, it's so tragic and yet not. I always thought it was cute the way he looks at the moon differently after Yue. so the moon's looking back in this one; loved the different rates of time, it really heightens how totally out of reach they are. very sad - but in a good way :)

daythirtynine May 25 2010, 19:32:55 UTC

I really do have something for tragic romances. Even though Yue was kind of inconsequential in the long run, I just feel so attached to Sokka/Yue.

owldee June 2 2010, 21:02:24 UTC

You do a great job conveying the way time is nonexistent for the spirits. It's beautiful and sad. Very nice.<3