Prompt 27: Sky: Away and Away by moonyalice515, rated K+

May 05, 2011 21:02

Title: Away and Away
Author: moonyalice515
Rating: K+
Words: 463
Genre: Gen
Characters: Zuko
Summary: The character development between the exiled prince hunting the avatar and the prince who ran away to save him.

He is no longer the world's prisoner )

rating: k+, prompt 27: sky, author: moonyalice515

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amyraine May 6 2011, 21:07:28 UTC
This fits well with the show, and works well on its own, too. I am struck by your imagery: "grandmother white in the afternoon sky, as fluffy as goose-duck feather" and "The world is going to crash and burn, it’s going to fall out of the sky and everyone will perish in the flames." The juxtaposition of air and fire is nicely symbolic.

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moonyalice515 May 7 2011, 02:11:33 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it :)

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