Original: To His Grave: Chapter 2
Title: To His Grave
Author: avari_maethor
Summary: This is not a story about romance. This is a story of friendship and how far that friendship goes.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some m/m situations mentioned however it is not a main piece of the story.
( Tommy smirked a little as his eyes started to drift closed… that was a sweet white lie. )
Author: avari_maethor
Summary: This is not a story about romance. This is a story of friendship and how far that friendship goes.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some m/m situations mentioned however it is not a main piece of the story.
( Tommy smirked a little as his eyes started to drift closed… that was a sweet white lie. )
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First part: Pretty steamy (no pun intended) but also very intriguing at the same time. It isn't just vile and gratuitous sex, really, but a candid dive into previous memories and sentiments. At least he has something nice to look back on. I love the Brad Pitt poster thing, haha... And Jolie in Gia! It reminded me of when I was that age. My parents came into my room so seldom that they never noticed or never cared to ask why I had pictures of Gillian Anderson tacked to my wall; this was a little before Pitt and Jolie were around, hehe. I forget who would've been the big heart-throb back then. Keanu Reeves mebbe...
Middle Part: Oh family and your familness! And oh high school and your cliques... I'm not sure if this filled me with nostalgia or poison. Ugh, memories.
Final Part: Dance, dance! :D And watching boys in locker rooms - and elsewhere! Now I'm all paranoid because I know Tommy's going to diediedie, and that makes me sad, because you've ( ... )
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First part: My online bro/beta suggested that and I liked the idea. It took us a loooong time to decide on which actors to use. So much research goes into these stories, I swear!
Middle part: Hopefully it wasn't to bad. Please like Tommy's rents, they are very close.
Final part: I needed something that would ground Tommy as having a hetro relationship before. In my bro's words, "I can see it, hell I can feel her leg wrapped around mine." Which, by the way, gave me a chuckle too.
A person, my first review on ficitionpress.com, is guessing how it happens but I can't tell. I just told them to go read the prologue again.
"Let's play" ...Hm... sure why not? :P ( ... )
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