wip:give up the ghost, btvs/alpha&omega

[avamclean]

Title: Give up the Ghost
Chapter 5:Part A: ready or not
Prompt: #452 scullion @ tamingthemuseRating: FR13

Comments

[kerrykhat]

Oh I love this so much. Buffy and Bran renegotiating their relationship and Buffy and Dawn reconnecting and just everything. I find how Bran views the situation and how Buffy views it to be really interesting, and now I'm really intrigued by how Dawn sees everything that's happening. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next!

[avamclean]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have to flesh it out some more because I was under time constrants to get this scene done for the prompt, but I'm glad the bones are good. :) Dawn and Anna will likely have the most keen insights into the group dynamics. They're the outsiders in the strictest sense and Charles is Anna's tie to the pack (outside the pack bonds) and Buffy is Dawn's.

I feel like Bran and Dawn need to have a conversation soon(ish) in this story and something tells me neither one of them is going to like the other very much.

[kerrykhat]

So will you be fleshing out this scene in particular (what's posted here) or will it be fleshed out in further parts?

Oh man, that conversation with Bran and Dawn is going to be a harsh one. Dawn probably blames him for what Buffy turned into and Bran blames Dawn for changing his mate and what that could mean for him. *grabs popcorn*

[avamclean]

This scene in particular. I'm a big fan of completing a scene and then giving it a cool down period before I edit, but I completed this Saturday evening so the cool down didn't happen. I think the back half needs the most fleshing out since that's what I was working on Saturday.

Those two definitely don't hold punches and a teenage Dawn boldly threatened Spike. This Dawn is older, more powerful and pretty much gives no fucks when it comes to her sister's wellbeing. Bran is in for rude awakening if he thinks he can dominate her. Should be interesting. :D