this is one of the best fics i've ever read. this is, quite frankly, a godsend because i've been pining to read a mama!au(?) sekai fic for the longest time!
that aside, i love how the story's intricately plotted and how the characters and setting are written. the entire thing was so beautiful and solemn but gave a nice amount of mystery and thrill. i really sympathized with sehun in this story because i'm very similar to him in real life. their powers are written exactly how i imagined it should be and seeing the members utilize their powers and interact with each other made me squeal (too many times to actually count)! there were so many parts in the story that made me gasp audibly and/or made me say "...oh" out loud and i can actually count on one hand the amount of stories that have made me do so! the last premonition sehun had was so sweet and i just!!! kudos!
aaaahhh i am literally sobbing internally, you are waayyy too kind! ;;w;; <333
i love how the story's intricately plotted and how the characters and setting are written thank you so much for saying that! it's not quite a dystopian backdrop, but it's far removed from reality and, frankly, i was afraid that i hadn't fleshed it out enough; but at the same time, i was hoping to put a larger focus on the characters than the setting. i'm glad that you liked how that turned out, even though i may have glossed over a lot of details, settings-wise. ;;u;;
i can't tell you how much i appreciate this whole comment! i wish you weren't anon so that i could love you properly! ;o; thank you so much for reading! <333
Oh god, I loved this ;A; it actually hurt when Jongin told Sehun to stop coming over ;A; uuughhhh, it took so much for them to be together AND THEY'RE GOING TO GROW OLDER TOGETHEEEER CHUSKSIHDJUEU I can't really write a lot, cuz I have an outline to finish, but guuuurrrrrl, this was perfect.
oh my gosh, thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment! ;;w;; i'm so glad you enjoyed it, and yessss, these babies deserve to be happy. <333 tysm!! :) :) :)
Okay, so I LOVED your fic. It was incredible. Well written, engaging plot, and the world was actually incredibly intriguing - have you thought about doing more works in this universe? The riots you mentioned, the laws introduced...a lot of potential, and I'd be super interested in reading more!!
Sehun and Jongin, gah, adorable. I just...I loved it. Your fic did end up being more light-hearted that I anticipated though (even though Sehun almost died, yeah), but I think that's because the threat of Sehun being a Red Flag Hybrid was referenced so many times.
Anyways, I finished your story just as Edith Piaf's C'est L'amour finished playing, and it was a perfect way to set the mood. THANK YOU FOR THIS INCREDIBLE STORY!!!
aahhh i'm so happy you enjoyed it!! :'D right now i'm considering writing a xingdae backstory. might take a while, though because i went crazy and signed up for another fic exchange /headdesk. i'm not sure if i'll delve into the whole background/history of this universe much more (though i did have that backstory built in my head while i was writing this) because i tend to focus on the characters more (plus, i'm really bad at world-building omg ;;;); but there might be mentions of it, at least? :)
Your fic did end up being more light-hearted that I anticipated thoughoh! yeah i get you lol! ^^ i guess the threat of being a red flag hybrid was sort of an internalized conflict/struggle for the characters (sehun, especially) more than it was the conflict of the whole story... like it's meant to explain why the characters are the way they are, rather than to effect a big event/explosion/dramatic turn. if that makes sense? idek what i'm saying rn i'm sorry! lol
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I loved how the plot is intriguing yet not made complicated like it's so simple which made my reading more fun that I just can focus on the interactions of each characters. :) THAT WAS MY GOAL AND OMG I'M REALLY, REALLY GLAD YOU THOUGHT SO!!! (;;w;;)
oh thank you!! i'm so happy to know that you enjoyed reading this. ^.^
i really like how the first part of the story is centered around sehun, and his character. it makes all his internal struggles more relatable, amfjks! i'm so glad! i was really hoping it would! ;w;
stubborn!sehun yesss! lol. and yet also caring enough that he tones it down a bit for jongin's sake when he has to. <3
haha yeah, boisterous!yeol gives me life tbvh. :3
aw, no your comment totally made my day!!! you're a sweetheart. ;u; i'd definitely love to write more sekai if i get the chance. ^.^ thank you so much for reading!! <333
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that aside, i love how the story's intricately plotted and how the characters and setting are written. the entire thing was so beautiful and solemn but gave a nice amount of mystery and thrill. i really sympathized with sehun in this story because i'm very similar to him in real life. their powers are written exactly how i imagined it should be and seeing the members utilize their powers and interact with each other made me squeal (too many times to actually count)! there were so many parts in the story that made me gasp audibly and/or made me say "...oh" out loud and i can actually count on one hand the amount of stories that have made me do so! the last premonition sehun had was so sweet and i just!!! kudos!
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i love how the story's intricately plotted and how the characters and setting are written
thank you so much for saying that! it's not quite a dystopian backdrop, but it's far removed from reality and, frankly, i was afraid that i hadn't fleshed it out enough; but at the same time, i was hoping to put a larger focus on the characters than the setting. i'm glad that you liked how that turned out, even though i may have glossed over a lot of details, settings-wise. ;;u;;
i can't tell you how much i appreciate this whole comment! i wish you weren't anon so that i could love you properly! ;o; thank you so much for reading! <333
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I can't really write a lot, cuz I have an outline to finish, but guuuurrrrrl, this was perfect.
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Sehun and Jongin, gah, adorable. I just...I loved it. Your fic did end up being more light-hearted that I anticipated though (even though Sehun almost died, yeah), but I think that's because the threat of Sehun being a Red Flag Hybrid was referenced so many times.
Anyways, I finished your story just as Edith Piaf's C'est L'amour finished playing, and it was a perfect way to set the mood. THANK YOU FOR THIS INCREDIBLE STORY!!!
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Your fic did end up being more light-hearted that I anticipated thoughoh! yeah i get you lol! ^^ i guess the threat of being a red flag hybrid was sort of an internalized conflict/struggle for the characters (sehun, especially) more than it was the conflict of the whole story... like it's meant to explain why the characters are the way they are, rather than to effect a big event/explosion/dramatic turn. if that makes sense? idek what i'm saying rn i'm sorry! lol ( ... )
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THAT WAS MY GOAL AND OMG I'M REALLY, REALLY GLAD YOU THOUGHT SO!!! (;;w;;)
thank you so much for reading!! /hugs <333
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i really like how the first part of the story is centered around sehun, and his character. it makes all his internal struggles more relatable,
amfjks! i'm so glad! i was really hoping it would! ;w;
stubborn!sehun yesss! lol. and yet also caring enough that he tones it down a bit for jongin's sake when he has to. <3
haha yeah, boisterous!yeol gives me life tbvh. :3
aw, no your comment totally made my day!!! you're a sweetheart. ;u; i'd definitely love to write more sekai if i get the chance. ^.^ thank you so much for reading!! <333
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