His Life Closed Twice Before Its Close by turps33

Oct 23, 2007 10:24

Author: turps33
Video: Incomplete.

Huge thanks go to silencegrenade and phaballa who stepped up and did a great beta job at the last minute. You guys rock.

His Life Closed Twice Before Its Close )

story, bsb

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trumpeterofdoom October 23 2007, 09:53:33 UTC
Really liked this, and I want to know more about this 'verse!

“AJ took the car.”
AHAHAHAHAHA. That will never ever stop being funny. I'm also glad you didn't kill Brian in this story, I would've been tempted to do it with that visual of him going under. :)

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turps33 October 23 2007, 10:08:27 UTC
Thank you!

Oh man, you don't want to know how hard I had to fight against the mega angst this video prompted. Brian was so close to being bumped off *g*

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ariadnem October 23 2007, 12:47:03 UTC
I want to read more *.* How can it be over so soon?

I so want to cuddle Kevin...and God knows what else I'd do to him :P

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turps33 October 24 2007, 10:16:14 UTC
Hee! You Kevin molester, you.

Thank you, honey.

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brighton_girl October 23 2007, 16:59:20 UTC
I don't read much BSB, but I think you did an amazing job with the video visuals. It's good.

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turps33 October 24 2007, 10:28:40 UTC
I have to admit, I don't read much BSB either and this is the first BSB story I've written for years, so I'm glad it was okay.

Thanks so much for the comment :)

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vaudevilles October 23 2007, 20:42:05 UTC
Really really interesting world you create here. And you avoid the angst beautifully while still evoking that desolation they've got going on.

*mwah*

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turps33 October 24 2007, 10:29:43 UTC
It was so hard to keep away from the angst. Like I was saying to JM, the urge to have Brian die was huge. But, I was strong *g*

I'm glad you liked, thank you :)

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turlough October 26 2007, 14:56:46 UTC
Oh Terri!! This is so beautiful and melancholy and just wonderful! Kevin cares so much about his boys! *squishes him* Thank you so much for once again writing in this universe!!

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turps33 October 30 2007, 11:21:17 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! It was fun to write them again, I just wish it had been a little longer.

Thank you :)

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